A Love Note

Where there is love
The heart is light.
Where there is love
The day is bright.
Where there is love
There is a smile
Where there is love
It's all worthwhile.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Pettit Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 4:50 PM
When I write, I try not to repeat lines and words. However, in this case, repeating emphasizes the meaning of your poem. I agree with Sandra just below; this is lovely.
Gelok Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 5:19 PM
thankyou...I so appreciate your feedback. And I will keep this in mind as I continue my journey into the poetry world.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 12:12 PM
Hello Virginia Gelok, i just read this lovely poem. these words are so true. This poem will be my fav. Enjoy your day my friend.
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April 4, 2021 at 6:49 AM
Happy Easter my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 9:54 AM
Hello Virginia,I also think so Virginia. nothing wrong with that.at all. Enjoy your day my friend.
Gelok Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 7:42 PM
thankyou so much. I think this is what I will be known for...short, easy poems. I am glad you liked it.
Rees Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 3:36 AM
Short but sweet and also very true. Well said!
Gelok Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 10:15 AM
Thankyou. Hopefully one day I will become better at this and be more daring in my writing.
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