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A Love Note

Where there is love The heart is light. Where there is love The day is bright. Where there is love There is a smile Where there is love It's all worthwhile.

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Robert Pettit

Date: 3/27/2021 4:50:00 PM

When I write, I try not to repeat lines and words. However, in this case, repeating emphasizes the meaning of your poem. I agree with Sandra just below; this is lovely.

Virginia Gelok
Date: 3/27/2021 5:19:00 PM

thankyou...I so appreciate your feedback. And I will keep this in mind as I continue my journey into the poetry world.

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 3/26/2021 3:24:00 PM

This says it all, in just a few lines. Lovely.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/25/2021 12:12:00 PM

Hello Virginia Gelok, i just read this lovely poem. these words are so true. This poem will be my fav. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/4/2021 6:49:00 AM

Happy Easter my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/27/2021 9:54:00 AM

Hello Virginia,I also think so Virginia. nothing wrong with that.at all. Enjoy your day my friend.

Virginia Gelok
Date: 3/26/2021 7:42:00 PM

thankyou so much. I think this is what I will be known for...short, easy poems. I am glad you liked it.

Peter Rees

Date: 3/25/2021 3:36:00 AM

Short but sweet and also very true. Well said!

Virginia Gelok
Date: 3/25/2021 10:15:00 AM

Thankyou. Hopefully one day I will become better at this and be more daring in my writing.