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A Love Letter

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This does not represent the my employer's opinions, it's fiction.

With her I’m free to open my wings, To soar a straight line to the stars, To embrace the deck of wonderful wants, When she deals her innocent cards, Because she feeds my desire, my yearn, urge and wish, She feeds the want in my soul, By cupping my mind and whispering love, She allows me to lose all control, Of a life that is stuck in a nine to five drain, She throws all the dull to the curb, And tells me to bloom through the arch in the sky, And fly like a mythical bird, My lover I love her, I love what she does, I love every card that she deals, I love how she meets my emotional needs, I love the love that I feel.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/3/2018 4:45:00 PM
I love every card she deals that meets my emotional needs. Love this both poetic and prophetic
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Date: 5/25/2018 4:40:00 AM
What a beautiful poem my friend! Had missed reading your work. The passion comes through so acutely
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