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A 'Love' Comet Tale

In the dimming dawn of pulsar uncertainty, asteroidal tear projections of past launch failures boosted the fear of rejection It made you afraid of me ... and my shy Virgo intentions Understandably, when you’re in a cloudy sigh free-fall, it’s so hard to see the many aorta constellations yearning Haley, for too long those Ripley heartaches put you in cryo sleep — Suspended dream animation, so sadly, suspended your belief In finding a precious Saturn Ring love Pleiades fate saw you drifting in the void Meteorite showers were falling in a pillow black hole ~ The wrong side for a pained Gemini soul Tossed to and fro by solar fierce solo wind, you fell deep into a lonely heart wail ... Pulsating ache singularity Then, at the tragic Love’s end of this comet tale, you reached out to me With a frantic, last rescue gasp, you asked: “Why are the guiding stars rotating wrong ... Has the spinster dark event horizon captured my desperate plea?” Tenderly beholding her escape pod of doubt, I gently open-hatch said: “True love has an Orion strong grav pull, it makes a romantic Comet tale blaze bright — Let’s take an Alpha Centauri journey to love flight” Earthly felt mind-meld bells did Saturn Ring on the third orbital date with destiny Binary bosom thoughts a-slowly b-coalescing Haley, your eyes now flash with aurora joy, catching the passion sparks comet tarry falling ... Ever so glow lovingly In the bright twilight of quasar possibilities

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/20/2019 4:34:00 AM
The romantic warrior at work in this description!;)
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Date: 11/18/2019 7:13:00 AM
A very deep poem full of meaning - Your Love Comet Tale rocks my friend - .... true love..... 'makes a romantic comet tale blaze bright'. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/14/2019 9:59:00 AM
WoW! Freddie, I never seen a "love" tale quite like this before. Stellar lines and content. It "shot" right off the page. I really enjoyed this my friend. It's going straight into my favs. Have a fantastic day:-) Alexis
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