- A Lot Of Candy -


                                       I eat caramel so it slams
                                 Pink cotton candy tastes like jam
                                     Chocolate melts in my mouth
                               Licorice laces eaten meters and meters
                               Sour candies gives me tears in my eyes
                                    Lollipops how sweet and delicious
                                                 I`m so sticky
                                    and I have such pain in my teeth











19. June. 2012
A-L Andresen :)
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Mohammed Avatar
August 1, 2013 at 3:26 PM
Lovely write,now heres me going to get me one also.Hugs
Andresen Avatar
August 1, 2013 at 3:29 PM
- Mustapha, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Horsman Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 9:46 AM
you have got me going here, i'm just reaching into the lolly Jar,, like this fun poem...
Andresen Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 9:49 AM
Harry, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Breidenthal Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 12:38 PM
Very very cute! :D Always, Laura
Andresen Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 12:39 PM
Laura, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Pettit Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 2:23 PM
Oral bacteria turn the sucrose into pyruvic acid, and that in turn erodes the teeth. Brushing your teeth is so important.
Andresen Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 8:09 AM
Robert, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Cayton Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 4:52 AM
Oh by the way, before you bake them, take a fork and flatten them out by making a mark with the fork vertically and horizonally. :) next week short bread ccokies, its easy, used to make them for the kids when they wanted something sweet, and we didn't have much. :)
Andresen Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 6:51 AM
I will try....thank you. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Cayton Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 4:47 AM
I got your sweet com, I'll give you a simple recipe for perfect peanut butter cookies everytime... remember 1, 1, and 1 I cup peanut butter I Icup of Sugar I egg preheat oven at 350 degrees bake for 8-10 minutes They are scruptious, and they don't even have flour in them. I was amazed! Have a great day, before long, you'll be the cookie Queen... :)
Andresen Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 6:50 AM
Thank you Cindy.....you are the cookie Queen. :) - oxox love Anne-Lise
Courtney Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 1:17 PM
to much sweets
Andresen Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 1:24 PM
Yes, to much - thank you Ruth for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Debole Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 5:19 AM
Hi Anne Lise - I am probably going to have to have some candy today! Your poem has inspired my taste buds. - Gail
Andresen Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 7:16 AM
Gail, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Larison Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 6:51 AM
that is very good. I loved candy as a child, It was one thing I looked forward too. Great write my friend !
Andresen Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 6:54 AM
Laurel, thank you for visit and comments my Candy. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Anish Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 9:32 AM
One might gain weight simply by reading this poem! Tasty work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Andresen Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 10:09 AM
Matthew, thank you for visit my Candy poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Haick Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 1:20 PM
: )) This is tempting and as sweet as the candies described, Anne Lise. Thanks for commenting on my latest. Yes, I've been away for awhile. Love, Annalise
Andresen Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 1:24 PM
Annalise, thank you for visit and comments my Candy poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Ishmael Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 11:51 AM
hello my friend anne lise i like candy too ,very nice like itand you make me want to eat some candy right now
Andresen Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 1:23 PM
Kasim, thank you for visit and comments my small poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Lu Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 11:24 AM
aw, a very sweet poem literally in all aspects. Thank you for always supporting my poetry. Appologies for not remarking yours more oft. Much Love, Cindy
Andresen Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 11:28 AM
Cindy, thank you for visit and comments my small poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Johnson Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 3:56 AM
sounds about right, sore teeth night, love it ...
Andresen Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 4:20 AM
Don, thank you for visit and comments my small poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Campi Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 2:53 AM
Wow!! You do love sweets! I am a chocolate hound myself. Have a great day, Jancarl
Andresen Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 4:19 AM
Jancarl, thank you for visit and comments my small poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Agtani Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 1:14 AM
Indeed you are so sweet Anne Lise! I may need some of your chocolates now before I brush my teeth! Thanks for patronizing my corner. Love Dalila
Andresen Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 2:28 AM
Dalila, thank you for visit and comments my small poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Caulfield Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 4:39 PM
My son says he loves the poem. So do I. I guess it's because it's sweet and sticky. Can you soup mail me some chocolates. You have my sweet tooth aching.
Andresen Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 2:27 AM
Big hug to your son! Thank you - and mom to. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Sanderson Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 4:35 PM
" I loved every minute of this sweet candy SENSATION, Anne-Lise... As my teeth fall out on this one, LOL!!!! Xox0 Carma, SWEETHEART
Andresen Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 2:26 AM
Carma, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Sweetheart Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 7:37 PM
a yummy tasty treat in sweet lines of candy goo so tempting puts a smile on my face Anne Lise.. chocolate kissws to the rescue luv..
Andresen Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 12:40 AM
L-M - thank you for visit and comments my small poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Guzzi Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 3:06 PM
awww LOL you had to go ruin it by reminding me of MY TEETH LOL..my fav is licorice..black & full of molasses! Light & Love
Andresen Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 12:39 AM
Debbie, thank you for visit and comments my small poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Goller Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 1:36 PM
All that sweet will do that. A lovely sweet delicious poem.I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich
Andresen Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 1:40 PM
Erich, thank you for visit and comments my small poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Onclaud Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 12:54 PM
you are my candy girl, anne... have a fine day!!..:) hugggs!
Andresen Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 12:59 PM
Welcome to have some candy,Nette - oxox love Anne-Lise
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 11:32 AM
Sounds a nightmare to me I dislike anything sweet, nice write though xx
Andresen Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 11:36 AM
Mandy, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Neels Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 11:19 AM
Anne Lise, you sure have a lot of candy floating around in this delightful write of yours.. This made me smile tonight.. Hope your week is an awesome one, love & hugs Wilma
Andresen Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 11:23 AM
Wilma, thank you for tasted my Candy - oxox love Anne-Lise
Christian Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 9:55 AM
aww how sweet i love chocholate caramel and shoe lases and candy flos yummy, ans thanks for your kind comments
Andresen Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 9:58 AM
Diane, thank you for tasted the Candy - oxox love Anne-Lise
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