A Loser Once More

A loser once more. Somehow, it happened again. Oh so foolish me. I thought I could win money. History repeats itself.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 4:48 AM
Congratulations on your fine win Robert ha ha, that'll teach you to keep your hand on you halfpenny xx
Brown Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 11:56 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D."s "Tanka~sad song" Robert. Love, Carol XXXX
Susan Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 7:31 AM
congrats on your win! I like the berating, melancholy tone of this. good one :)
Sweetheart Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 4:27 PM
CONGRATS ROBERT ON A TREMENDOUS TANKA AND WIN LUV ..
Roberts Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 2:47 PM
I am fortunate to have not inherited my Mother's love of gambling, many congrats on your win Robert
A   Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 11:54 AM
Robert, congratulations with your to be or not to be tanka poem in my contest... take care of yourself' always~PD
A   Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 9:49 PM
Robert, i wonder if history has a way of knowing what will concur. Or is it just us finding our ways to the same ol' same ol'..love your poem...pd
Sivey Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 9:06 PM
Yeah, my parents used to frequent the casinos, and they lost a lot of the time! I don't bother with them...I never win so why just give them my money? I'd rather keep the money for myself and buy a meal for my family or something! Your poem successfully expressed the desire to win money but you see that you lose time and time again! What a delightful write my friend! Awesome piece, Great Work!!
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