A Long Way To Here

And the exhausting calamity of the twinkling snow
Frozen solid and thawing beneath the sky
Of gray turns to the palest of blue
With the sun so glistening gently by its rays

And the past flows like a shadow through the mist
Sparkling dew of spring’s once lonely gaze
For then was the time in which emotion stagger
To now his beating of my hearts electrical charade

And in the morning’s tears I notice the reflection
Of my own face, older, wise
And through the trees I hear a voice singing
Past the unknown and into the motioning twinkling of all that was lost
And found in the valley of the darkest shadow
And through the lonely hearts dizzy dance
Amidst the falling sky of a forgotten dream
Out of the waves of ruin of the wondering stare 

And she amidst the shore collapsing into the glistening ground
Until all that there will be, through these newborn eyes
Is that same melody floating through the awakening breeze
Until the only sound surpassing the expression of the earth
Is the voice of my love - 
Calling me home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/5/2017 6:15:00 AM
Oh my Rachel !! Simply beautiful piece !! ~~ Jeanie ~~
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Date: 2/23/2017 6:11:00 AM
So very beautiful and filled with a desire and longing. You have crafted a wonderful piece that tells of the darkness and the light waiting, guiding, holding us to make it through, welcoming us back home. This was fantastic. You are very talented.
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Date: 2/22/2017 11:49:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem, so well written. I love the repetitive use of the word 'and' at the beginning of many lines. Welcome to PoetrySoup. I am sure you'll find good poets and friends here, just like I did :)
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