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A Lonely Girl

I wandered the forest alone - the cool my cloak, with touch the sky trees my cathedral and haven. and birds singing a symphony. The forest was full of wonder and awe, for a lonely girl with raven hair. The streams rippled over time worn rocks- and wildflowers grew, and nature wrapped her arms around a sad girl. ___________________________ September 14, 2019 Written for the contest, Life sponsor, Ironic Zink

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Date: 9/14/2019 9:23:00 PM
I want to say "lovely poem" but that appears to be frowned upon. This form is new to me, I've only tried it once, for this contest and wasn't sure what I thought about it... upon reading this I have to say I like it. Good luck in the contest, you have won me over. xomo
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Constance La France
Date: 9/15/2019 8:42:00 AM
Maureen, thank you for visiting my poem, well I will accept the lovely for I do not frown on compliments. Yes, the form was new to me also, but I like how the poem turned out and will definitely consider doing more poems in this form of poetry.

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