A Lone Traveller On a Journey

Suddenly He returned...
A lone traveller on a journey
tripping with her memory

Breezes of unsceduled joy
He blew beneath her skin
Reaching deep witihin
breathing warmth, affectionately.

He poured honey from the moon
and filled her dusk with light
Oh how He made lost shadows shine
 He  made rays filter through
soft as a candle light.
Oh how it lit her vacant room
and kindled in her night.

Suddenly He returned...
A lone traveller on a jourmey
tripping with her memory

Like a young first love 
they danced so fervently
Like a young lost love
they parted unexpectedly

Their paths were not to meet again
beyond borders in between.
They've let their spuming stars
fade deep into the sea.

It could never be,just never be
Forbidden wants were pushed away
and so each  possibility.
Yet long lived thoughts, all wordlessly
as guarded dreams roamed silently.


Suddenlly He returned .,..
A lone traveller on a journey
tripping with her memory
keeps tripping with her memory
Always in her memory....

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Date: 10/6/2016 2:11:00 PM
Could you hear a melody when you wrote this? Because I could as I read. Really nice Charmaine
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Date: 9/30/2016 4:01:00 PM
Beautiful lyrics, Charm! A journey down memory lane! Once more you emphasize on paths that were not meant to meet again! #7+ Regards // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/2/2016 2:04:00 PM
Back again for a 2nd read, and with congrats for p.o.t.d. :) paul
Date: 9/30/2016 12:54:00 PM
My sweetie....your words simply captivate....this is sensational. Such beauty in every line...That last stanza...magnificent. I miss you, dear. I miss Malta. Those memories keep tripping through my heart. Congrats on POTD.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/30/2016 12:58:00 PM
I miss you too Eileen..and your wonderful family.How is your sister-in -law? ..Will you ever return to Malta? :) Thanks for reading dear.
Date: 9/28/2016 1:13:00 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Charmaine :) - A beautiful poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/28/2016 2:40:00 AM
beautiful lyrics Charma many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/27/2016 5:53:00 PM
so nice! the journey is what it's all about, and the destination is not..
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Date: 9/27/2016 5:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem of the day selection....
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Date: 9/27/2016 5:04:00 PM
Beautiful write, congrats on POTD:)
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Date: 9/27/2016 2:35:00 PM
What beautiful lyrics Char. A fav and a seven plus.
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Date: 9/27/2016 12:22:00 PM
Beautifully stunning!!!
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Date: 9/27/2016 8:14:00 AM
Hi Charmaine, You have penned such deep passionate lyrics. How can one forget a love like this? I see why you got the poem of the day. Congratulations ! A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/27/2016 7:57:00 AM
This is a lovely lyric, Charmaine:) the refrain is very beautiful...such amazing memories:) congratulations on Poem of the Day:)
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Date: 9/27/2016 7:57:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Charmaine. Love your poem!
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Date: 9/27/2016 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations of potd Charma. Well deserved Enjoy your day.
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Date: 9/27/2016 6:23:00 AM
Well written, congratulations Charmaine for POTD honors...
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Date: 9/26/2016 11:34:00 AM
"poured honey from the moon", "made lost shadows shine" wow Charmaine so passionate! no wonder she never forgot. Beautifully penned. I love it!
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Date: 9/26/2016 11:23:00 AM
such beauty in this loneliness, charms... you flow with poetic language; wow!..huggs
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Date: 9/26/2016 9:08:00 AM
Such a beautiful song Charma. There is a sadness but also a contentment that the time they shared would be etched in her memory and she could look back at anytime and smile.
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Date: 9/26/2016 5:26:00 AM
Lyrically beautiful ...
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Date: 9/26/2016 1:06:00 AM
Hello my dear poetic friend... The beautiful write here my dear... Doesn't anyone ever stay anymore...*winks....much love, james
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