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Image result for pictures of an old woman alone beside a pear tree

A green pear
 
Not hidden by leaves

At the top

So lonely

A prolific limb's product

Hangs by an aged thread

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Jack Horne

Date: 9/17/2022 6:22:00 AM

love this deep write & an interesting form too (must try it)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/17/2022 8:22:00 AM

I am glad that you found this one deep. I hope you do try this form. It is easy and short, but one can put several together I suppose. Give it a try because I know you can do it. Yes you can. Thanks, Sara

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/16/2022 2:07:00 PM

That last line is a keeper, as is the entire missive Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/16/2022 2:52:00 PM

Awesome that you find it a keeper. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/15/2022 7:11:00 AM

A great form for this lovely poem Sara. As Rico says, the importance of the stem is often overlooked until one is hanging there! Linda

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/15/2022 9:14:00 AM

Linda, The support of the stem determines the length of the pear hanging there before it falls. Like family ties. I appreciate the uplifting review. Sara

Brian Sambourne

Date: 9/14/2022 9:04:00 PM

The isolation of the green pear hanging ever so precariously from a tree with ancient lineage makes for a stellar topic in your fine posting. Moreover, the metaphorical impact of the lonely pear remains with your reader, memorably. Best wishes, Brian

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/15/2022 5:38:00 AM

Brian, Why, thank you. You get the depth of this one very well. Thanks for dropping by and for taking time to comment. Sara

Elizabeth Mccann

Date: 9/14/2022 7:02:00 PM

Lovely metaphor, Sara. I'm sure I am the lonely pear hanging by an aged thread! i certainly have become pear-shaped!! Elizabeth

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/15/2022 5:32:00 AM

Yes, age can bring on the pear shape for sure, Elizabeth. At times, I feel like I am hanging by a thread and sometimes I feel the gather's hand is about to reach out. Thanks for the nice review of my work. Sara

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/14/2022 11:29:00 AM

I have always loved pears but never appreciated the stem before reading your poem. Well thought and done! Aloha!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/14/2022 2:01:00 PM

Thank you, Rico. I appreciate the nice review. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/14/2022 8:41:00 AM

Not good to eat before it becomes yellow.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/14/2022 11:02:00 AM

Victor, I kind of like the crisp flavor of a green pear but my stomach tells me I should not go there. LOL..I still do and pay the price. Your visits are so delightful. Sara

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/14/2022 8:41:00 AM

Elegant Spanish form, so artfully displayed Sara! first & last line exquisite book-ends! to mine faves, as Ruben used to say!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/14/2022 11:01:00 AM

James, You brought out a point about the beginning and the end which encouraged me in my writing. Thanks for the honor of faving this one. Your presence at my page is uplifting. Sara

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