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A Living Painting

A place to sigh- impressions of recollections in lasting retrospective lie. Venice-the most beautiful city I have visited.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/29/2009 1:17:00 PM

Beautifully penned Brian with so much image and clarity description... my goal is to visit Italy soon... am currently working on a new poem for your current contest...thankxxx again for u selecting me as honorable mention.. Linda-Marie

Elaine George

Date: 10/11/2009 1:56:00 PM

Venice! I have never been there, but I dream off it and so wish to visit there before I die. Wonderful fibonacci, Brian. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments. Lainie

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/9/2009 4:25:00 AM

nicely penned, beautiful...

Jared Pickett

Date: 10/8/2009 11:14:00 AM

Venice is a beautiful city, I agree... But if I had to choose a vacation spot, it would be in the south of France in a little place called Nice..... Ever heard of it? Beautiful.........:JP]

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/8/2009 9:08:00 AM

I like the way that you describe Venice. It would be a wonderful trip. I like the way that you did the technique. Keep writing. Sara

Donna Golden

Date: 10/7/2009 11:35:00 PM

Masterful creation, Brian. Hugs, Donna

P Sheart

Date: 10/7/2009 4:46:00 PM

Venice, you make it sound so intriquiting.It must be so beautiful....a lovely well written Fibonaccie, Brian. Thanks for sharing. Love Light Truth Patty

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/7/2009 4:36:00 PM

This is such a lovely Fibonacci, Brian. I have only seen it in pictures but it is someplace I would love to see. Thank you for your thoughtful comment! Love, Robin

Amber Jenkins

Date: 10/7/2009 11:32:00 AM

wow

Adell Foster

Date: 10/7/2009 10:23:00 AM

What a wonderfully penned fibonacci, excellent imagery,tone and flow. It is a pleasure to have read this lovely piece for you. Thank you Brian for sharing the read . I appreciate your welcome comments on my poetry as well my friend. :-) God's Love and Many Blessings, always,Adell

Sean Kelly

Date: 10/7/2009 8:33:00 AM

Great description , Brian . Not been there , but have been warned to bring the wellies !!...

Marty Owens

Date: 10/7/2009 8:29:00 AM

Been wanting to go there. Now even more so! Thanks for this poem...Marty

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/7/2009 8:07:00 AM

Oh my....that is one place I would long to go visit. But I can just imagine!! Lovely dreamy poem! ~ Carrie