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A Living Painting

A
place
to sigh-
impressions
of recollections
in lasting retrospective lie.


Venice-the most beautiful city I have visited.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 29, 2009 at 1:17 PM

Beautifully penned Brian with so much image and clarity description... my goal is to visit Italy soon... am currently working on a new poem for your current contest...thankxxx again for u selecting me as honorable mention.. Linda-Marie

Elaine George

October 11, 2009 at 1:56 PM

Venice! I have never been there, but I dream off it and so wish to visit there before I die. Wonderful fibonacci, Brian. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments. Lainie

Doris Culverhouse

October 9, 2009 at 4:25 AM

nicely penned, beautiful...

Jared Pickett

October 8, 2009 at 11:14 AM

Venice is a beautiful city, I agree... But if I had to choose a vacation spot, it would be in the south of France in a little place called Nice..... Ever heard of it? Beautiful.........:JP]

Sara Kendrick

October 8, 2009 at 9:08 AM

I like the way that you describe Venice. It would be a wonderful trip. I like the way that you did the technique. Keep writing. Sara

Donna Golden

October 7, 2009 at 11:35 PM

Masterful creation, Brian. Hugs, Donna

P Sheart

October 7, 2009 at 4:46 PM

Venice, you make it sound so intriquiting.It must be so beautiful....a lovely well written Fibonaccie, Brian. Thanks for sharing. Love Light Truth Patty

Robin L. Gass

October 7, 2009 at 4:36 PM

This is such a lovely Fibonacci, Brian. I have only seen it in pictures but it is someplace I would love to see. Thank you for your thoughtful comment! Love, Robin

Amber Jenkins

October 7, 2009 at 11:32 AM

wow

Adell Foster

October 7, 2009 at 10:23 AM

What a wonderfully penned fibonacci, excellent imagery,tone and flow. It is a pleasure to have read this lovely piece for you. Thank you Brian for sharing the read . I appreciate your welcome comments on my poetry as well my friend. :-) God's Love and Many Blessings, always,Adell