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A Little Star Wars Autumn

I enjoy all four seasons to see And yes, all the leaves that long to be On the other side Darth Vader resides His light sabre destroys all the trees Russell Sivey

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/20/2017 10:51:00 PM

This put a smile on my face, my friend - love it! (I have a few Star Wars ditties myself). Thank you for sharing the whimsical gem! :-)

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/20/2017 9:32:00 PM

you made me smile your imagination is beguiling.

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/20/2017 9:34:00 PM

Poets have their ways of eliciting responses from the reader.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/20/2017 10:44:00 AM

Ooh, that evil Darth Vader! Strip him of his saber and restore the splendor to the trees. Love your limerick, my friend. So glad to see you writing again, Rusty. Love, Carolyn

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/20/2017 5:51:00 AM

Lovely imagination--well written, Russell!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/20/2017 5:32:00 AM

Love the reference to darth vader and his light sabre - very clever poem indeed:-) hugs Jan xx