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A little Mixed up?


For us to
Grasp the Love
There are promises of . . .

Of us
The promises
Are there for
Love to grasp . . .

Grasp to us
For the promises of
Love are there . . .

There are promises
of us for
Love to grasp the . . .

The promises of Love
Are there for us to
                          grasp.

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Amy Bohack

Date: 5/21/2025 9:36:00 PM

my mind is twisted...and that's a good thing! thanks for sharing!

Amy Bohack

Date: 5/13/2025 10:04:00 AM

great flow! I liked it very much. ~Amy

Franci Hoffman

Date: 8/28/2024 8:23:00 AM

I love this! Brilliant writing, Benjamin.

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 6/9/2024 3:09:00 PM

I adore this poem many blessings to you Ben.

Benjamin Bartley
Date: 6/9/2024 3:11:00 PM

Thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/15/2024 6:04:00 PM

' the promises of love are there, for us to grasp. ' Your thoughts are not mixed up, they caress the page with elegance and grace. This is beautiful in every way. I wish to place this in my favorites, to read again and again. :) Brandy

Benjamin Bartley
Date: 5/16/2024 4:39:00 PM

That's very sweet of you. I' glad you enjoyed it.