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For us to Grasp the Love There are promises of . . . Of us The promises Are there for Love to grasp . . . Grasp to us For the promises of Love are there . . . There are promises of us for Love to grasp the . . . The promises of Love Are there for us to grasp.

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Date: 5/21/2025 9:36:00 PM
my mind is twisted...and that's a good thing! thanks for sharing!
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Date: 5/13/2025 10:04:00 AM
great flow! I liked it very much. ~Amy
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Date: 8/28/2024 8:23:00 AM
I love this! Brilliant writing, Benjamin.
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Date: 6/9/2024 3:09:00 PM
I adore this poem many blessings to you Ben.
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Benjamin Bartley
Date: 6/9/2024 3:11:00 PM
Thanks.
Date: 5/15/2024 6:04:00 PM
' the promises of love are there, for us to grasp. ' Your thoughts are not mixed up, they caress the page with elegance and grace. This is beautiful in every way. I wish to place this in my favorites, to read again and again. :) Brandy
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Benjamin Bartley
Date: 5/16/2024 4:39:00 PM
That's very sweet of you. I' glad you enjoyed it.

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