Benjamin Bartley Poet Free verse

A little Mixed up?

For us to
Grasp the Love
There are promises of . . .

Of us
The promises
Are there for
Love to grasp . . .

Grasp to us
For the promises of
Love are there . . .

There are promises
of us for
Love to grasp the . . .

The promises of Love
Are there for us to
                          grasp.

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Amy Bohack May 21, 2025 at 9:36 PM my mind is twisted...and that's a good thing! thanks for sharing!

Amy Bohack May 13, 2025 at 10:04 AM great flow! I liked it very much. ~Amy

Franci Hoffman August 28, 2024 at 8:23 AM I love this! Brilliant writing, Benjamin.

Mrs. Yolanda Nicholsen June 9, 2024 at 3:09 PM I adore this poem many blessings to you Ben. Benjamin Bartley June 9, 2024 at 3:11 PM Thanks.

Brandy Nicole May 15, 2024 at 6:04 PM ' the promises of love are there, for us to grasp. ' Your thoughts are not mixed up, they caress the page with elegance and grace. This is beautiful in every way. I wish to place this in my favorites, to read again and again. :) Brandy Benjamin Bartley May 16, 2024 at 4:39 PM That's very sweet of you. I' glad you enjoyed it.