A Little Memory-Spot

When I was only seven and happy we moved

leaving my very best friend Spot behind

leaving a family member

I cried for many weeks

I missed my best friend Spot more each and everyday

broken and devastated at seven.

 
 

 

Spot waits with holy angels for me in heaven

all day long we loved to run, sing and play

we miss playing ball at the creeks

Spot, I will remember

this move was very cruel, unfair and unkind

why was my very best friend Spot removed.

 

 
 

Even at seven I would have never approved

today-there are days I could lose my mind 

your birthday was in September

loved blusher on your cheeks

a child at seven I thought you would always stay

I stopped crying at the age eleven.                                             

 

Date written:12/27/2020

4 Place A Little Memory Invented Form Poetry Contest                         
Contest Judged:  1/16/2021 
Sponsored by:Constance La France

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 1/19/2021 2:40:00 PM
Emotive and expressive work you have penned. Congrats on your win. Sara
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/23/2021 11:04:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win. Have a blessed day.....................
Date: 1/19/2021 12:18:00 PM
Paula, congratulations on your win in my contest, A Little Memory using my invented Rhyme form _Constance
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/23/2021 11:04:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. I enjoyed writing about my Spot for your contest. He is a great memory. It was an honor to have a win. Have a blessed day.....................
Date: 1/9/2021 2:58:00 PM
So sad, but it made a fine Poem. Good luck in the contest Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/11/2021 10:00:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your good luck. It was hard to write. Have joy/blessings.................
Date: 12/29/2020 5:11:00 AM
Aww! When we were moving, my husband (unintentionally) gave our dachshund away in front of our son, who cried his eyes out in my arms that day.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/2/2021 2:47:00 PM
Thanks, for writing. It can be very hard for a child to go through. "Happy New Year 2021" Today, have joy/ blessings.................
Date: 12/27/2020 4:03:00 PM
Hello Paula Goldsmith, a dog is part of the family after all. It is sad to lose a dog indeqath. I will be facing this same thing very soon with my sister's dog. Because she is 13 years old and has cancer. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/28/2020 11:41:00 AM
Hello Paula, Yes it is hard to go through it. Can not do much about it. The dog is 13 years old. I hope you had a good Christmas. Blessings to you my friend.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/28/2020 7:55:00 AM
Thanks, for reading and for writing. So sorry about your sister's dog. It can be very hard to go through it. Today, have joy and blessings.................
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