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This originated during my college days (many years ago!) I have updated it some, but not much...

A little in love is all that I'll be maybe I'll fall just a degree Maybe I won't melt when he smiles maybe my hope won't run for miles Maybe my world won't encircle his face maybe my heart won't quicken its pace Maybe his words won't brazenly glow maybe my nervous worship won't show Maybe he won't counsel clandestine meetings maybe his touch won't be so fleeting Maybe my mind won't be dazzled and meek maybe my will won't be hollow and weak Maybe I'll excuse his passion-borne bruises maybe I'll use the face that he uses A little in love is all I'll concede but love can be lies fools like me believe. 3/16/18

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Date: 3/23/2018 10:37:00 AM
Gosh, this brings back so many memories. You've touched this reader's chord, and I imagine many others' chords, with this wonderfully contemplative, understated romantic treat. Excellent, Michelle! :) Gershon
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/23/2018 11:08:00 AM
Yes I think this has held up well over the years - so glad as always for your encouraging words!
Date: 3/16/2018 7:44:00 PM
I agree with very well written and rhymed. The joy and agony of youth! Amazing piece and a FAV for me!....patrick
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/18/2018 8:41:00 AM
thanks for your kind words, pat!
Date: 3/16/2018 3:56:00 PM
This is perfect, it accurately reflects all the maybes I know I have experienced, and probably every one else, at various times in my life. It is also well written and well rhymed. So glad I'm not in the 'maybe' stage of love any more, nor would I want to be - it's not easy. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/16/2018 4:16:00 PM
Thank you for your thoughtful comments, caycay.

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