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A Little Bit Less

I think you should refrain, When your belly shows the gain, Desserts, biscuits, also cake Should be struck off your intake, Your appetite may feel the strain.

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Jack Ellison

Date: 5/3/2015 11:15:00 AM

All those things you mention... yum! Okay I confess, I'm guilty of over indulging!!! Cheers, Jack

John Williams
Date: 5/4/2015 3:41:00 AM

Yes Jack, aren't we all. Thanks for stopping in,......You've brought me a grin......kind regards----John

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/3/2015 5:44:00 AM

Oh but I love those you've mentioned! Just a little of everything though, you're right. Good evening John!

John Williams
Date: 5/3/2015 6:50:00 AM

Good evening Kim. Yes, you're right, a little bit of everything won't hurt anyone. Life is to be enjoyed. Thank you for having a read Kim........hugs from John

Rochelle Harris

Date: 5/2/2015 9:59:00 AM

Hi John, I'm one of the newbies here in the Soup and I have read and enjoyed so much of your work. Unfortunately, my appetite does not feel the strain until after my intake has overtaken..my clothes! (: ...walkin' on sunshine...Rochelle

John Williams
Date: 5/2/2015 12:08:00 PM

Great comment Rochelle, good for you. Welcome to the Soup. Thank you for reading my poems, it is much appreciated. Happy writing Rochelle.