A Little Bit Less

I think you should refrain,
When your belly shows the gain,
Desserts, biscuits, also cake
Should be struck off your intake,
Your appetite may feel the strain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ellison Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 11:15 AM
All those things you mention... yum! Okay I confess, I'm guilty of over indulging!!! Cheers, Jack
Williams Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 3:41 AM
Yes Jack, aren't we all. Thanks for stopping in,......You've brought me a grin......kind regards----John
Nunez Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 5:44 AM
Oh but I love those you've mentioned! Just a little of everything though, you're right. Good evening John!
Williams Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 6:50 AM
Good evening Kim. Yes, you're right, a little bit of everything won't hurt anyone. Life is to be enjoyed. Thank you for having a read Kim........hugs from John
Harris Avatar
May 2, 2015 at 9:59 AM
Hi John, I'm one of the newbies here in the Soup and I have read and enjoyed so much of your work. Unfortunately, my appetite does not feel the strain until after my intake has overtaken..my clothes! (: ...walkin' on sunshine...Rochelle
Williams Avatar
May 2, 2015 at 12:08 PM
Great comment Rochelle, good for you. Welcome to the Soup. Thank you for reading my poems, it is much appreciated. Happy writing Rochelle.
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