A Literary Train Wreck

Poetry is my most recent passion That's got me by the scruff of the neck Grabbed me a couple of years ago Not getting much sleep, I'm a wreck Sure didn't know when I started all this It would ignite this fire in my soul That rages consuming every damn moment Two poems a day is my goal This Poetry Soup site sure is addictive First thing in the morning I'm there To see who's reviewed my latest entries Did they think I wrote them with flair? Late into the night I'm feverishly editing Tweaking the words to the last A few things still really bug me though But time's running out really fast Trembling I go to the “post poem” prompt I click it then patiently wait A feeling of anxiety creeps over me As I sit there awaiting my fate © Jack Ellison 2012
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March 23, 2018 at 10:25 PM
"Two poems a day is my goal" Wow - so amazing that you write everyday my friend. You are truly amazing to me. I may never catch up with you! But you best believe I won't stop trying! Love you and your amazing poetry with all of my heart. We are blessed to be graced with your verses. Always, Laura
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March 24, 2018 at 6:42 AM
Okay, now you've done it, my sweet Laura!!!! Can't believe the words you're saying! No one has ever encouraged me, EVER, as you have! I can't thank you and express my love enough!!! THANK YOU!!! LOVE< HAPPY JACK!!! XOX
Guzzi Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 5:50 PM
Join the club [I'm giggling!] Download this FREE program it's a BIG help everything you need on 1 page VersePerfect. Let me know what you think? Light & Love [PS these ARE Quatrains!!!YES]
Ellison Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 7:32 PM
Tried to download VersePerfect but apparently it's only for a PC... I'm on a Mac! Thanks Debbie... love and happy thoughts, Jack
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October 8, 2012 at 2:32 PM
Jack, relax. A wordsmith extraordinaire are you-- Pleasing all with thoughts so true. If sleep is cheated now and then. Please go easy on your pen-- He is giving us delight-- Think its worth a sleepless night! Victoria
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October 8, 2012 at 7:25 PM
Thems is mighty fine well written words, my dear Victoria... thanks a whole big bunch! Love nd happy thoughts, Jack
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October 8, 2012 at 1:31 PM
"In the old days" went "poets / storytellers" from house to house and told their stories - I'm glad we have a computer that spreads yours and my poetry all over the world in a second. - It's amazing Jack ... (?) Keep writing my friend ........ press the send button. :) oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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October 8, 2012 at 1:37 PM
Love you, Miss Norway! It's amazing how the world has become so small and people everywhere are so close now. Thank you Anne-Lise! Hugs, Jack xox
Eastman Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 11:53 AM
You think it's bad to be addicted to writting? Well, I'm addicted to reading them... LOL I had been gone for a while and spent the whole day catching up... It was a very enjoyable day, indeed.
Ellison Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 12:51 PM
Oh I noticed... you must have read about 40 of just mine!!! So happy to have you back with your cheery upbeat attitude... love ya bunches!
Bauer Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 9:49 AM
i hope you don't have to wait too long to get your comments - your poems are fun to read and i'm sure that people are responding. i think all of us on this site can relate to this poem, though - we all hope to be acknowledged for our efforts.
Ellison Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 9:58 AM
People are responding and it sure is rewarding! I thank you, Ilene for your continuing interest in my poetry! Love ya... hugs, Jack xox
Gorelick Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 7:30 AM
OH, I can relate! But you are so talented, no need to be anxious. lol. BG
Ellison Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 7:38 AM
You are so kind my dear dear friend... thank you! Have a great day! Love and big hugs, Jack
Poet Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 7:29 AM
Yeah Poetrysoup is no doubt addictive.Great write.Enjoyed this jack.
Ellison Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 7:35 AM
Thank you my friend... have a great day! Jack
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