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A Liquified Desert

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A Liquified Desert A peacock glissades as a trail triggers, an ambience of turquoise and chartreuse, for it sparsely spreads as its glass mirrors, neath a ceiling stain aquamarine blue. Ghostly strands of lit fingers, it searches, for soulless wanderers, offers a chance, so new souls will exist, former merges, exposed to a new presence in a trance. Memories of beating, now heard aloud, with their eyes wide, they behold, hesitates, they see a beige wavy floor, glossy shroud, it's a liquified desert, it's a dusk straits. Charioteer cupids, gallops cherubs, Flies souls with anointing doves, to terras, 2019 June 10 *1st Place* Poetically Me THIS PICTURE WHAT CHA' SEE ~~James Edward Lee Sr. Picture: #1

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2019 9:52:00 AM
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what wonderful imagery William, congrats on your win, been looking at your sonnets contest and will have to try and think of something special as I am not good at this form and rarely write them, but I do try:-) hugs jan xx
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/18/2019 9:56:00 AM
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Thanks Jan
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/16/2019 6:52:00 PM
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Wonderful imagery, William! Congrats on a top placement.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/16/2019 5:17:00 PM
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Your entry is a real stunner William and very deserving of your First Place win! Congratulations my friend! xxoo : )
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/16/2019 6:43:00 PM
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I am appreciative of your wondrous commentary Connie ~ William
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Sandra Adams
Date: 7/16/2019 3:53:00 PM
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this is gorgeous....congrats on your win :) hugs
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/16/2019 6:41:00 PM
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My many thanks indeed for your share Sandra ~ William
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/10/2019 3:51:00 PM
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Splendid hues and interpretation of picture #1..a well written poem, William.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 6/10/2019 5:01:00 PM
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My hat's off to you Vijay, Aloha William

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