A Lifetime of Joy

When you and I were one, A lifetime of joy cached, Us dancing neath the sun With passion unabashed, Fond filaments finespun, Golden memories stashed.
1st February 2023 For Line Gauthier's "Bite Size Contest No. 60"
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Kauffman Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 10:30 AM
Jo, wonderful word use describing a treasury of romantic, tender, memories. Blessings and best wishes for the contest!
George Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 8:16 AM
Highly romantic and beautifully pleasant memories and reminiscences of a relationship to be stashed away! A great entry ! All the best Jo
Buhagiar Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 1:05 AM
A delectable bitesize of a poem.
Romios Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 2:26 PM
Romantic, well done, Good luck. Panagiota
Andresen Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 10:55 AM
- A finespun sweet poem, Jo :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 9:34 AM
A delicious bite size of a poem.
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