A Life's Lyric

Life's lyric should be,
It's actually there, whoever wants to see.
It is neither miraculous nor a magical trick.
It's all for humanity, a quintessential lyric,
"we are all in this together
and we shall build it brick by brick."
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Rose  Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 9:26 PM
we are indeed, :)
Daub Avatar
January 15, 2022 at 1:43 PM
Short and very sweet. Nicely done my poet friend! Grace
Croft Avatar
January 15, 2022 at 12:11 AM
very beautiful!
Deo Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 9:46 PM
Beautiful, true, hopeful. If only .... (dear Marshall, may I query a typo or tense issue in last line? It reads "shall built", instead of "shall build.")
George Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 7:39 PM
Life is as personal and musical as a lyric. Its symphony can be enhanced by each one's effort. When we together work in tandem, it can be made into a wonderful concert! Lovely thoughts Marshall
M  Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 12:42 PM
Hi Marshall….love this poem….very clever and well written! Debx
Liguori Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 6:58 PM
one brick at a time as time presses forward. a beautiful look on life.
Ahmed Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 8:16 AM
Thank you very much for your kind and nice comment.
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