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A Life's Lyric

Life's lyric should be, It's actually there, whoever wants to see. It is neither miraculous nor a magical trick. Its all for humanity, an quintessential lyric, "we are all in this together and we shall build it brick by brick." (01.014.2022)

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Date: 1/19/2022 9:26:00 PM
we are indeed, :)
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Date: 1/15/2022 1:43:00 PM
Short and very sweet. Nicely done my poet friend! Grace
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Date: 1/15/2022 12:11:00 AM
very beautiful!
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Date: 1/14/2022 9:46:00 PM
Beautiful, true, hopeful. If only .... (dear Marshall, may I query a typo or tense issue in last line? It reads "shall built", instead of "shall build.")
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Date: 1/14/2022 7:39:00 PM
Life is as personal and musical as a lyric. Its symphony can be enhanced by each one's effort. When we together work in tandem, it can be made into a wonderful concert! Lovely thoughts Marshall
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Date: 1/14/2022 12:42:00 PM
Hi Marshall….love this poem….very clever and well written! Debx
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Date: 1/13/2022 6:58:00 PM
one brick at a time as time presses forward. a beautiful look on life.
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Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed
Date: 1/14/2022 8:16:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind and nice comment.

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