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A Life Was Taken Away

A painted black audi, damaged in every possible way A life taken away Bottles of beer and shots of vodka going smoothly down his throat Lonely, misunderstood, misguided, depressed This is someone I know The man I spent more in my childhood rather than my own father is gone Tears were shed, and hearts were broken I can’t believe he is gone my mother says I look at the ashes in the petite box All my memories of him trapped in my thoughts People surround the box pretending that they knew him I can’t help but look with disgust America is the land of the free However too much freedom is what took him away What an ironic American dream they would all say A man lost his way There’s nothing left for me to say Except… I wish I told you I loved you before it was too late.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/3/2019 3:52:00 PM
What a beautiful piece of work and a reminder to us all that it is imperative to appreciate and love what we have, for tomorrow it can be taken from us. Keep up the great work.
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Mystery Girl
Date: 1/6/2019 11:09:00 AM
Thank you so much, that means a lot :)

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