A Life Was Taken Away

A painted black audi, damaged in every possible way
A life taken away
Bottles of beer and shots of vodka going smoothly down his throat
Lonely, misunderstood, misguided, depressed
This is someone I know
The man I spent more in my childhood rather than my own father is gone
Tears were shed, and hearts were broken
I can’t believe he is gone my mother says
I look at the ashes in the petite box 
All my memories of him trapped in my thoughts 
People surround the box pretending that they knew him
I can’t help but look with disgust 
America is the land of the free
However too much freedom is what took him away
What an ironic American dream they would all say
A man lost his way
There’s nothing left for me to say
Except… I wish I told you I loved you before it was too late.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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January 3, 2019 at 3:52 PM
What a beautiful piece of work and a reminder to us all that it is imperative to appreciate and love what we have, for tomorrow it can be taken from us. Keep up the great work.
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January 6, 2019 at 11:09 AM
Thank you so much, that means a lot :)
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