A Life Not Lived

I am not remembered in any form or way
Undeserving of their love and respect.
I understand, and yet I grieve.
For myself.

For what I lost
Ignoring the ones who could have
Showered me with love
But did not 
Because they knew me not.

I reserve my place in the cosmos
Of ignorance 
Recognizing truth and love
once again upon the throne of death
as I enter a kingdom I do not deserve

The angels grabbed me and gave me
what I had sought on earth in the form
of lust,  not even my biggest mistake.
My soul cries now
At a life not lived.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Roy Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 1:28 AM
A very good poem. Nicely presented. God bless you.
Krutsinger Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 6:47 AM
Thank you Pratap. I truly have some deep feelings that have to have poetry as an outlet.
B. Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 8:29 PM
Congratulations on POTD, dear Caren.. I absolutely enjoyed this work of art.. I am inspired by your wonderful creativity.. An amazing write, my friend. A fave for me!! Blessings..
Krutsinger Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 9:48 PM
Thank you Robertina. I appreciate your stopping by.
Andresen Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 12:00 PM
- A touching poem, Caren - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 9:49 PM
Dear Anne-Lise, I was tempted not to post this one as it felt a bit negative, but I wrote it so....
Rodrigues Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 6:45 AM
Congratulations, Caren! Your heart spills from your pen.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 9:49 PM
Thank you Kim. She truly does. I try to keep her back but she will not be thwarted.
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July 9, 2019 at 6:13 AM
Congratulations on POTD Caren! Poignant! xomo
Krutsinger Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 9:49 PM
Thank you Maureen. I am so glad you stopped by!
Proxenos Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 12:58 AM
Caren my dear friend , I am proud to know you, you of all of us are so full of life, enjoy every day as we only get one shot at living our life. Congrats on POTD truly deserved. Hugs, Jennifer.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 2:59 AM
Thank you so much, Jennifer. It was so surprising and I knew about it early thanks to Tania and Tom who posted about it before I went to a workshop yesterday morning. It is so nice to be honoured. I am so glad that you stopped by! Thanks.
Romios Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 11:29 PM
Sorry, Caren, I did not see this earlier. I was up till 2am PST and it was not posted yet, so I went to bed, Congratulations on the POTD. Exciting event! Panagiota
Krutsinger Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 12:23 AM
I fully understand. I am trying my BEST to go to sleep tonight at 12:22 a.m. but alas, here I am, not sleeping and I have a workshop all day tomorrow! Thanks for the congratulations, my friend.
Messina Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 9:11 PM
Powerful and thought provoking. Great write, Caren. Congratulations on POTD :)
Krutsinger Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 10:51 PM
Thank you Charles. They say when death is at your door you never regret the things you tried and failed at; all of your regrets are about the things you did not try that you wanted to try.
Nicole Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 7:33 PM
"I am not remembered in any form or way" This thought touches my heart so deeply. It's very sad indeed, for those that will never have the opportunity- to Live. Congratulations Caren, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brady
Krutsinger Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 10:52 PM
Thank you Brandy. It is sad.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 7:22 PM
An expressive poem that is profound my friend. Congratulations on your deserving honor of POTD! Congratulations! : ) xxoo
Krutsinger Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 10:52 PM
Thank you so much Connie. I felt it was pretty wonderful to learn of this honor before 6 a.m.! Too bad my internet went down most of the day.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 6:17 PM
You can really feel it as you read it. Great POTD.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 10:53 PM
Thank you Paula. I am so glad you stopped by.
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 4:40 PM
Love your thoughts , Caren, congratulations on POTD
Christensen Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 3:18 PM
So emotional! Congratulations!!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 3:32 PM
Thank you so much! I almost did not post this one. Now I am glad that I did.
Sands Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 1:24 PM
Congratulations for your great POTD Caren! :)
Krutsinger Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 3:33 PM
Thank you Heidi. I was pretty surprised and happy.
Ravidas Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 1:04 PM
Wow, that's what I call the words! THE WORDS. They are my belated fave. And, hoping, fave again. Congrats, Caren. This is amazing.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 3:34 PM
Thank you Kurt. I penned this for another site for a specific contest. Almost did not post it here. Ha! Glad I changed my mind.
Ashley Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 12:29 PM
Your potent pen has delivered a beautifully expressive and thought provoking poem, Caren. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Krutsinger Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 3:35 PM
Thank you so much Susan. I was super surprised. Glad I decided to post this one.
May Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 9:54 AM
A powerful write Caren..Congrats on POTD..
Krutsinger Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 3:35 PM
Thank you Joseph. I appreciate your kind words.
Wanter Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 9:36 AM
VERY good, Caren! And a warning to many of us. Congratulations!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 3:36 PM
I did truly mean for it as a warning for life is so short. I did not realize how short until I got shingles and experienced seven weeks of pure h.....
Y. Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 9:10 AM
Hi Caren, This is such a deep and thought provoking write. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved- Alexis
Krutsinger Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 3:36 PM
Thank you Alexis. I was so shocked but excited!
Turner Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 9:00 AM
Congratulations Caren on POTD. Nicely penned!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 3:37 PM
Thank you Daniel. This was such a nice surprise!
Warrior Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 8:35 AM
Caren, you hit one right out of the park...Congrats!! on your much-deserved POTD!!...very emotive write my friend...grabs at the core...sending much love and respect...^WW^ :o)
Krutsinger Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 3:37 PM
Right out of the park! Wow! This makes me feel very special. Thank you Winged Warrior!
Barden Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 7:27 AM
Sincere congratulations on Poem of the Day, Caren.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 3:37 PM
Thank you Greg. I am so glad you stopped by. This made me smile.
Michael Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 7:08 AM
Lovely lovely lovely...Congratulations
Krutsinger Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 3:38 PM
Thank you Arturo. I am warmed by all of these congratulations which makes the POTD feel so much greater!
Knowlton Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 6:34 AM
Congrats Caren on POTD…I could truly feel your pain and regrets. I think we all have them.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 3:39 PM
I know we do, but do we share them? I certainly do not but this time, I thought I might give you a little peek....
Trifiatis Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 6:17 AM
Congratulations dear, Caren!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 3:39 PM
Thank you my dear Demetrios! I was overwhelmed. The responses make it even better!
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