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A Life Force

O wind, a life force travelling wide and far. I dip down to oceans and ruffle the sea, O how happy to meander, to feel free. I access mountains and revere every star, Hearken to me as I gust so far and wide, I veer towards valleys, all verdant fresh grass, Pass quickly through some mountain tortuous pass. My unchained melody over white clouds ride. I love to see eagles fly on currents warm Visit hamlets, villages, communities, Admire all, their toil and opportunities. Watch over small birds evading a big storm. How I prefer the fragrant countryside ways But I must also travel to frightful towns Where many sadly live with their ups and downs. There, sweet lovers are happy and their God praise.

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Date: 1/4/2021 12:28:00 PM
- I often see eagles flying ... a beautiful sight :) - A wonderful poem, Victor :) - These days we have an icy wind - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/4/2021 5:13:00 AM
Love this and love this form, too... You always think of such poetic images. Beautiful. God bless you Victor
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Date: 1/3/2021 6:42:00 PM
Victor, The places visited in your poem span the range of home and away so very nice. This Enclosed Rhyme was well-thought-out. -Richard
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Date: 1/3/2021 6:17:00 PM
Following this lovely travel!
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Date: 1/3/2021 5:44:00 PM
I second that WOW from Alexis. One of your best rhyming poems I have seen from you, and so profound, my friend!!
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Date: 1/3/2021 5:21:00 PM
WoW! Victor, What a well written and descriptive write. Good imagery and content. I enjoyed the read. Well done. Happy New Year, my friend:-)Alexis
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Date: 1/3/2021 4:57:00 PM
A wonderful picture of the wind you have portrayed here, Victor :)
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Date: 1/3/2021 3:58:00 PM
Oh well done Victor. A cleverly crafted piece. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/3/2021 3:30:00 PM
Beautiful Victor superb lines. well done. Pete.
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Date: 1/3/2021 3:11:00 PM
Love the wind but it can also be a destructive force as well. I enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 1/3/2021 2:33:00 PM
To be free as the moving wind, seeing the world on what lives and grows on it. Great write, Victor. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/3/2021 1:26:00 PM
Wonderful ode to wind you wrote. Much scenic imagery on your lovely journey you painted, Victor.
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Date: 1/3/2021 1:08:00 PM
Oh to be free like the wind, the ability to travel far and wide. Hope your new year off to a good start Victor, covid raging over here in the uk. We're in for a rough ride, hospitals struggling. Tom
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Date: 1/3/2021 1:26:00 PM
Unfortunately I read about it but we will be no better as we don't obey the set rules. ~~

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