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A mother is she who can take the place of all others but whose place no one else can take. Gaspard Mermillod
When I was a baby, you sang me to sleep Mom, do you recall when we lived in our town? White and blue lights covered the road steep Riding through busy paths with your hair down. How can I serve you with my whole love and soul? Even years after our final talk, you're still whole A thorny hedgerow has grown between us We've even lost the aptitude to rekindle, thus. I realize you're toiling away to improve our lot in life I catch you attempting to offer us all a carving knife Even if it costs you, you can bestow what we need You never received it, and you made my heart bleed. When the holidays come, I witness you crying Forever, a sorrowful song of living and dying under the shade of a tree in the garden Is the exposed ground, the wet skies harden? I realize how firm it was to raise us on your own You didn't have time for yourself and never alone Always frying or ironing other children's clothes And often sweeping up dirt or colds from a nose. Everything you do reveals your affection You say you love me, and I feel that connection I have no doubt that what you're saying is true I also love you, Mother, even if I rarely tell you. Mother, you're pure water with white wings that fly Mother, your voice sings chorally in the ears of the sky Mother, you're the vital vow and the softest wind Mother, you're the highest, finest, and kindest mind. Mother, you're hope, faith, support, and a clear sky Mother, you're a deep blue sea with an eternal supply Mother, you inspire creativity in lyrical poetry Mother, you're a bright hue, an endless love tree. 1st place contest winner Written: April 17, 2023 Letter To My Mother Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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Date: 5/17/2023 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win, Dear Poet. Enjoyed your poem expressing emotions in great poetic rhyming verse. Excellent details what your mom went through! The last two stanzas are fantastic - to me, incredible! Best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 5/17/2023 12:14:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end. God bless you, and belated Happy Mother's day to your Mom. Thanks also for my placement in your recently-judged contest.
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Date: 5/16/2023 7:23:00 PM
Back to your poem of beautiful sentiments for your mother to congratulate you on your well deserved first place win.
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Date: 5/16/2023 6:56:00 PM
A beautiful personal address to the mother elaborately explaining what she has been. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/16/2023 11:16:00 AM
Nice poem, Sotto. Great you won.
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Date: 4/20/2023 7:15:00 AM
Sotto, you wrote a beautiful poem, "Mother, you're a deep blue sea ..." best of luck in the contest !
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Date: 4/17/2023 9:42:00 PM
Such a heartfelt tribute to your loving mother. This bouquet of gratitude, you can place at her feet. Whether we love or not, a mother cannot stay away from loving her children. So great is a mother's love. You have made a beautiful entry with warm feelings overflowing from your heart. All the best, dear Lasaad
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Date: 4/17/2023 7:45:00 AM
Just so beautiful in its love bestowed and received from your dear Mother . I journeyed through memories and time spent watching her through your eyes and heart Lasaad . Lovely . I love ~ Mother, you are water with white wings that fly ! Hugs to you , Susan :)
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Date: 4/17/2023 6:01:00 AM
So heartfelt and touching write my friend. Reminiscing in treasured memories, Lasaad.
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Date: 4/17/2023 1:59:00 AM
- A beautiful and touching poem, Las :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/17/2023 1:06:00 AM
WOW Lasaad ….a truly touching and beautiful poem! Just lovely my friend! Debx
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