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A Letter To His Struggle Pt 1

I see the broken smile, the frown hidden so good Depression hitting it's hardest, who know that it would Who knew that it could, destroy somebody's life so quick Wreck a family, it stabbed like a knife so swift And cut, the deepest wound but I'm here to heal Let my words clean the dirt, and keep you real That way you feel, it's not to late to just go back Start with a clean drive, since you got hacked And you got jacked, man I want you to feel loved Not to feel buried, not to feel like we've given up I'm know you're tired of being of tired, so take my energy Take my laughter, take anything that enters me The inner me, sees you and I see you for the truth These are more than words spoken, these are words spoken to you It's true, been with you 13 years and I know that you're lost Let my words guide you back to your path, don't ever stop I, know that its rough and it's hard to go through The pain and repercussion telepathically knows you But, try and rejoice with me just once again I wanna know you like more than you are, a best friend [x2] In deep thought, I look into your eyes and see nothing Forget the repercussion of coming up, and just flunking Let me fix your cerebellum, give balance to your thoughts Let me make you whole again, let it be the lesson I thought You used to walk around the house, full of depression Mom's gone, our whole life dedicated to stressing She's here, but it still seems like she is far away Let it be a blessing meant to be blessed another day The boot of life stomped hard, and you took full impact Struggling to keep your job, with this weight on your back You slacked, a tiny mistake but it did it's damage Through all of the ups and downs, you've stayed strong and managed A warrior in my eyes, because you stood up for the fight You walked through the darkness, now I'm giving you light You were right, no matter what happens it's okay I'll see to it to repay you, before my lights fade

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/13/2014 9:47:00 PM
Wow... so many emotions going on here. The story is so vivid. I feel like you're forgiving your dad for wrongs he did in the past... and wanting so bad to reconnect and become like they were before. Did he suffer from depression? Well I'm very impressed with Part 1... onto Part 2.
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