A Lesson Missed From School

That opposites attract would seem the rule.
In chemistry and physics it is found.
And samples of this principle abound
from magnates to the smallest molecule;
from X to Y in our genetic pool!
In courtship too this law proves rather sound
albeit that some exceptions can confound,
but I, for one, missed something from my school.

Past meeting, polar minds need intersection-
acceptance, awe, same goals desired to seek.
Else how can there be mutual affection
if two cannot match up?  Love can be bleak!
Where’s a plain equation? Now dejection
has taken hold of me. I scale no peak!

For the Equations Contest of Anthony Slausen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Arnone Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 3:45 PM
You have failed to provide an adequate equation or a Cupid formula. Also, what is the significance of: "but I, for one, missed something from my school?" :-)
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 7:43 PM
that is a stupid poem not worth thinking about, Tom. I hated the topic of the contest too!
Sage Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 10:17 AM
indeed one of the equations we never learnt in school...excellent write Andrea, my best wishes
La France Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 8:29 AM
Andrea, this is outstanding, what a great write for the equation contest, a winner for sure and I am loving this 7 ~
Heemstra Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 7:45 PM
You are awesome on these contests! My wife and I are the opposites she's a dancer and I have two left feet, I'm the sports nut she's not, but we're tighter than tight! I love your write!
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 5:12 PM
Your rhyme is superb in this piece Andra. Reminds me a bit of my poem 'polar opposites'. I agree. Hugs, Connie #7 I sure hope he appreciates your entry like I do!
Babcock Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 1:40 PM
Love this clever piece Andrea. love phyl
Sathasivam Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 2:57 AM
Cleverly and lovely done sonnet. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
A. Sharma Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 2:35 AM
Love equation is so tough to derive Andrea.. masterful sonnet here.. best wishes
Hicks Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 10:20 PM
You captivate early on in this piece ... and you said that equations scare you (could have fooled me). Masterfully written ... I can see a win in your future with this creative write. Loved you how you compared actual chemistry to "love chemistry"...
May Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 8:02 PM
I like how you did the equation in a sonnet...that equals a winning write!
Parker Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 7:47 PM
Love this sonnet Andrea,your message has sound reason, but for me whether its opposites or not the ability to argue and not allow it to become personal is the solution to the equation
Lamoureux Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 7:24 PM
This just doesn't add up! Just kidding, you get 100%!
Laurie Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 7:14 PM
Just another beaut verse from you Andrea. Enjoyed - Lindsay
Ashe Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 5:04 PM
The chemistry, physics and mystery of opposite attractions is the question of all time! Your write is a good ask... "where's a plain equation?" :-)
Horsman Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 4:27 PM
They say there is someone for everyone the skill is in the finding. Yes our generation or at least mine, had many short falls in that sort of education. but with all the knowledge the human race has amass, one would think problem solved, alas no...Only the poetry gets better especially yours.
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