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Charles Green was eight years old, and his father was a great teacher. Yet, Charlie preferred playing to school; because he was a daydreamer. The Greens lived in the town of Ivoria, where dahlias nodded greeting; And Charlie frolicked with Sam and Scarlett, until sun came, bleeding. Samuel and Scarlett were his siblings. Both got good grades in school; Like gardens dyed in burgundy, red, orange, and gold, lovely as jewels. Fantastic, flaming nights were not far, and gusts fitfully tossed flowers; As good friends flattered the family with visits, like silver glazed hours. Funny family rode for miles, to laugh jokes, or olden days, out of focus, When fruitful summer was finally full-grown, and jade frogs visited lotus. Charlie lived in the house of enlightenment, like a saffron sun, forever; Where lilac breezes brought on awareness, in emerald days of whatever. Soaring ravens owned the satin nights, when navy twilight was missed, On Charlie's street of songbird serenade, and big moon, still sun kissed. Formality was never necessary with neighbors, when they came calling; In a pretty nation of nearsighted novelty, where aged time was crawling. The touch of jazzy 'jade vines,' adored June, and monkey tail cacti leapt; As 'jungle velvet dottie' posed pretty, and 'little baby dwarf kowha' wept. 'Alien egg succulents' waited an eternity, only for pleasure of being born; And 'blue shrimp' plants swam sadly, like snows, as weather turns warm. On his way to school, Charlie began to dawdle. Frogs were so much fun! Like honey sunshine on the first rose, back when scents were first begun. Charlie's lateness was fun for a time, as neither of his parents knew of it; Then his teacher made him realize, that with learning, the sky's the limit! She finished her talk with the following words, that haunted him forever; And made him a better pupil and person, like all honest, fruitful endeavor: 'A diller, a dollar, A ten o'clock scholar, What makes you come so soon? You used to come at ten o'clock, And now you come at noon.'

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Date: 12/12/2024 9:16:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your "A Lesson Learned" write. We can learn at any age even when older. Enjoy your day..................
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/12/2024 3:15:00 PM
I'm thrilled that you liked this tale, Paula. Deepest thanks for your gladdening remarks. :)
Date: 12/3/2024 1:45:00 PM
Ha. That was funny how you ended with that nursery rhyme I remember so well. But Charlie still learned a lot just being out in nature!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/3/2024 8:16:00 PM
Thank you for expressing your enjoyment of this tale, and for the smiles. It's very true that there is much to be learned from nature. Blessings.
Date: 12/2/2024 8:33:00 AM
Your sweet poem presents a whimsical portrait of young Charlie Green, a daydreamer who lives in a world full of vibrant imagery and the freedom of childhood. Through its colourful descriptions of Charlie’s life in the town of Ivoria, the poem evokes a sense of innocence and boundless imagination. The opening lines establish Charlie as a playful, carefree child who, despite having a great teacher for a father, prefers to indulge in his fantasies rather than engage with the formalities of school. This sets the tone for the tension between freedom and responsibility, which underpins the narrative.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/2/2024 3:32:00 PM
Thank you for your thoughtful, positive remarks, for which I am deeply gratified, Silent One. Wishing you the best of the holiday season, Evelyn :)
Date: 12/1/2024 4:04:00 PM
Such a lesson shared by you Evelyn the whole story is an inspiration to all who read. A fav for me Dear Lady. God bless you...
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/1/2024 9:49:00 PM
Dear Michael, deepest thanks for your kind words and for your fave. A blessed holiday season to you and yours.
Date: 11/30/2024 5:41:00 AM
Dear evelyn, this is a new theme for me as i havent heard this nursery rhyme but you always find them and write on them in ways that are truly engaging! I love the rhymes and use of colors and how youv personified elements of nature such as dahlias etc. and how youv delivered one that is very creative! Is beyond impressive and leaves an impression! Your way with words is always so artistically pleasing. Pleasure reading your work always. Sending you light always!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/30/2024 2:46:00 PM
Thank you for the joy of your appreciation, dear Ink. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. Your comments always make me smile.
Date: 11/30/2024 2:21:00 AM
So true. Wasting all the time to learn anything is fatal. Good thing he learned his lesson. Great poem as usual.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/30/2024 2:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Victor. It's a pleasure to read your comment today. Blessings. :)
Date: 11/29/2024 8:11:00 PM
This is a fine poem with a great lesson. I don't think I've ever learned the original. You're story is terrific.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/29/2024 9:23:00 PM
So glad you enjoyed it, Hilda. I'll bet there are few people who are familiar with all the nursery rhymes. There are thousands! Thank you very much for your gracious words. Blessings.

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