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A Length of Time

combing my unkempt hair unraveling years of not caring my freedom knotted with reckless abandon untangling each strand of dissatisfaction cutting as curls fall away each length a strand of injured time January 30, 2023 Bite Size Contest #60 Sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Date: 3/11/2023 12:29:00 AM
Excellent Lonna and a wonderful use of metaphor. Cheers - Gary
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 3/23/2023 9:33:00 AM
Thanks Gary. Appreciate your comment. Lonna
Date: 1/30/2023 7:08:00 PM
Absolutely love this!
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 3/23/2023 9:33:00 AM
Thank you so much for your comment! Lonna

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