A leaves goodbye

Catastrophe, no I'm not bitter
                The wind caresses my margins 
                Children tickle my cold veins 
                I float to the terrain 
                For Oak Kin to thrive 
                I say crisply
                I'm charcoal 
                Goodbye 
                Time
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December 21, 2023 at 8:02 AM
I love the rawness and personified imagery of this, how you’ve placed you thoughts to a realm of leaves bidding farewell is so very impressive. Beautiful flow and syllables on point. “ The wind caresses my margins :Children tickle my cold veins “ this stood out the most for me!!! So creative! Pleasure reading this. Congratulations on your win. Wishing you beautiful holidays ahead
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