A Leaf Provides

A natural cup
Collecting drops from heaven
Holding natures drink

Nathan Bane Leccese
© All Rights Reserved 05/21/2009
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 6, 2009 at 12:34 PM
This one is my favorite of yours, Best of luck with both submissions...Raul
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September 26, 2009 at 11:26 AM
Another honor for this poem! Congratulations on having two poems make it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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September 24, 2009 at 12:14 PM
Nathan, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition, good luck mate >> James
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June 28, 2009 at 3:10 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured Nathan>>James
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June 28, 2009 at 4:53 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured
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June 27, 2009 at 11:12 AM
Very clever, Nathan the way you worked the title right into the haiku !! Perfect ... smile ... and a very well-deserved selection to be featured this week at the Soup! Congratulations!
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June 25, 2009 at 11:07 AM
Congratulations on your double features. Love, Carol
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June 25, 2009 at 10:52 AM
Congratulations on the "Double" feature. Vince
Brown Avatar
June 24, 2009 at 7:33 AM
Great write and congrats!
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June 23, 2009 at 1:47 PM
Very beautiful short poem. I love Haiku. Congratulations and God bless. Ernilando
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June 22, 2009 at 4:31 AM
Congratulations on your feature this week !! great write ! james
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June 21, 2009 at 11:44 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Nathan.Rgds Brian
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June 21, 2009 at 6:24 PM
Nathan, I just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen
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May 22, 2009 at 1:09 PM
This is a great haiku keep up the good work. Bethany
Fraser Avatar
May 22, 2009 at 8:24 AM
Clever poem, giving water its place on this amazing planet, James
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May 21, 2009 at 10:44 PM
Mail reply...Raul
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May 21, 2009 at 10:18 PM
What a lovely image, Nathan! What better way to serve nature's drink than with nature's own creation -- the beautiful leaf. Love, Carolyn
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May 21, 2009 at 8:24 PM
Beautiful write!!!!!
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May 21, 2009 at 6:42 PM
You are terrific..this is one great haiku. BG
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May 21, 2009 at 3:49 PM
I just saw a close up photograph of just that on another site. Perfect! Love, Shar
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May 21, 2009 at 3:25 PM
What an uplifting poem. Interesting perspective for the reader to think about. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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May 21, 2009 at 2:22 PM
Hi Nathan A lovely Haiku! I love the thought of holding nature's drink collected from drops from heaven. Just beautiful writing as always. Truly enjoyed Love Light Truth Patricia
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May 21, 2009 at 2:16 PM
Wow, this is excellent, you are well disciplined in this concise form. Great job two thumbs up...Raul
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