A Late Summer's Child - By Age One

As a child born late summer, my senses were first flooded by the images, sounds and smells of fall. Was I aware of orange pumpkins, wind caressing the bright leaves, and smells of pies? I must have known the cold of wintertime. Did I marvel to see my first snowflakes and feel them too falling on my skin? Christmas would have been in the air – pine scents and sounds of carols. The wonder of spring coming surely had brought me delight. My soul was growing then in many ways. Did I toddle in sunlight, looking at pretty flowers nodding in a cool breeze? Summer’s advent would have brought my first experience with sweltering days and perhaps a parade! Did my eyes widen to see fireworks burst in night’s sky? Did I wade along sea’s shore? By age one (not knowingly) I’d have learned much about life.
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Kendrick Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 6:10 AM
Congrats. SK
Allison Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 8:15 AM
what a wonderful nostalgic write Andrea i can recall things from about aged 2 not before:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 7:53 AM
An interesting trip Andrea. I hadn't really thought about those very early months. I quite like this. Congratulations! :)
Pinet Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 1:35 PM
Congratulations, Andrea! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. Beautiful work, my friend, Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 9:06 PM
Thanks so much, Emile
Maverick Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 8:00 PM
Great scenes here Andrea, alive and vibrant Great to read .'
Bowring Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 2:34 PM
I love this lovely poem dear Andrea full of gorgeous imagery, sights, sounds. So well written. Captivating as one goes through the seasons. Delightful. By the way, September is also my birthday month. Fellow Virgo? Or Libra? Thank you for sharing. So enjoyed it as always. Blessings to you.
Gregory Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 1:31 PM
A real treat for us in its transition of each stage. Imagery and nostalgia excite an emotional part of us. I really like the quest, parasol rainbow, and merry go round. Lovely write.
Buhagiar Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 2:10 AM
Pity we have to grow and lose the art of toddling in the sunshine. Your description of the Fall is captivating. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 3:14 PM
I wonder if my love of Fall has anything to do with being born in the Fall. Love the cool weather, the sweaters, the refreshing air… Great read, dear Andrea!
Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 3:34 PM
I bet it does. I love summer but also September. My birthday month offers the best of summer and fall.
Narain Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 10:42 AM
I don't know if I remember anything around being one year old. Eyes were wide open, did not know what I saw. Nice poem though, well envisioned.
Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 3:33 PM
I don't remember but I wonder if our brains are processing these things somehow!!
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