A Last Letter

Can you see me swim?
With dolphins back home I go
It's time for sunsets.

 My Haiku is accompanied by one of my pictures of the sunset from my blog.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 2:46 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Iolanda. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 2:42 AM
thank you for sharing this--reading about sunsets and dolphins in your haiku just made me smile :)
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January 18, 2010 at 11:52 PM
Sunsets over the ocean are so beautiful. And they do call one home. Very nice imagery, Iolanda. Smiling, Dane Ann
Anish Avatar
November 13, 2009 at 9:14 PM
You must live in a nice sunny place. Keep'em coming! Yours Matthew Anish
Kendrick Avatar
November 12, 2009 at 2:48 PM
I thought that a Haiga is a Japanese picture that is done in simplicity. I do like the Haiku that you have done here. Thanks for the comments on my work. Keep writing. Sara
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October 23, 2009 at 5:29 PM
Hi Iolanda, i have seen the picture, and your words do it justice >> James
George   Avatar
October 22, 2009 at 7:30 AM
Beautiful Haiku, Iolanda. thank you for sharing. Love, Lainie
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