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evening falls- out of the blue silhouettes wallpaper the sky

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Date: 9/15/2021 12:04:00 PM
Never thought of the sky as wallpaper. What a great idea just like this write. Love this one and the night sky. Have a blessed day...........
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/16/2021 12:38:00 AM
Full of images Paula that live in memory
Date: 9/14/2021 1:32:00 PM
I just read a haiku of Harry's with a similar theme. Gorgeous just like harry's is!
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/15/2021 12:51:00 AM
Great minds Andrea as the saying has it
Date: 9/13/2021 9:54:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Brian:)
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/14/2021 12:50:00 AM
Sadly Jo,these happenings are all too infrequent
Date: 9/13/2021 8:38:00 PM
An "evening sky" is so beautiful and tender. It is: Poetry in motion. I am wrapping your thoughts softly around me. Because. :) Brandy
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/14/2021 12:49:00 AM
Yes Brandy,something reflective about eventime
Date: 9/13/2021 3:51:00 PM
I love the winter wallpaper Brian and as the Autumn approaches the wallpaper becomes more elaborate and everchanging... with kindest thoughts Ann xx ps this living picture surrounds our Pier each night and is truly spectacular to watch. Your poem brings this scene alive. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/14/2021 12:48:00 AM
Wow,ypu are fortunate Ann
Date: 9/13/2021 12:58:00 PM
Such lovely, colorful images. Well done.
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/13/2021 2:22:00 PM
Imagism a fave form for me Evelyn.Thnks
Date: 9/13/2021 7:59:00 AM
Simple and perfect.
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/13/2021 10:42:00 AM
Yes,thnks Richard
Date: 9/13/2021 6:48:00 AM
Just love that wallpaper, Brian. Great hiku.
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/13/2021 7:30:00 AM
Yes Harry..living picture
Date: 9/13/2021 5:08:00 AM
Ahh!! I wonder what bird group that was. I enjoyed reading your work. Sara
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/13/2021 5:25:00 AM
Starlings murmuring perhaps Sara
Date: 9/13/2021 3:46:00 AM
I can see it and it is beautiful, Brian!
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/13/2021 5:26:00 AM
Looking to roost maybe Kim.Thnks