A Last Call Hiku

evening falls- out of the blue silhouettes wallpaper the sky

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/15/2021 12:04:00 PM

Never thought of the sky as wallpaper. What a great idea just like this write. Love this one and the night sky. Have a blessed day...........

Brian Strand
Date: 9/16/2021 12:38:00 AM

Full of images Paula that live in memory

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2021 1:32:00 PM

I just read a haiku of Harry's with a similar theme. Gorgeous just like harry's is!

Brian Strand
Date: 9/15/2021 12:51:00 AM

Great minds Andrea as the saying has it

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/13/2021 9:54:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, Brian:)

Brian Strand
Date: 9/14/2021 12:50:00 AM

Sadly Jo,these happenings are all too infrequent

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/13/2021 8:38:00 PM

An "evening sky" is so beautiful and tender. It is: Poetry in motion. I am wrapping your thoughts softly around me. Because. :) Brandy

Brian Strand
Date: 9/14/2021 12:49:00 AM

Yes Brandy,something reflective about eventime

Ann Gilmour

Date: 9/13/2021 3:51:00 PM

I love the winter wallpaper Brian and as the Autumn approaches the wallpaper becomes more elaborate and everchanging... with kindest thoughts Ann xx ps this living picture surrounds our Pier each night and is truly spectacular to watch. Your poem brings this scene alive. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Brian Strand
Date: 9/14/2021 12:48:00 AM

Wow,ypu are fortunate Ann