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A Lady In a Red Dress

Her Red coloured dress resembled a Venetian house which lay besides the gondola in an unrealized dream as the Gondola retreated through the hazy eyes of the canal the house kept on getting bigger painting one part of the lake with a mixed coating of the red and the green accumulated piece of the ubiquitous waters but still red was the colour green was the envy she was herself with the poets while a poet let one more dream die

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Date: 8/29/2014 7:33:00 PM
Red was the colour,green was the envy-I love this line and I like the concept of your poem-Excellent!Welcome to poetrysoup-Charma :]
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Date: 8/20/2014 10:54:00 PM
Excellent write and a fine choice for Poem of the day! Congrats!!!
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Sandeep Kulshrestha
Date: 8/23/2014 8:46:00 AM
Thanks Robert! Your words mean a lot!
Date: 8/20/2014 9:59:00 PM
great piece. congratulations and thank you for a great read.
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Sandeep Kulshrestha
Date: 8/23/2014 8:46:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 8/20/2014 4:24:00 PM
Congrats on being selected as the poem of the day, wonderful :)
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Sandeep Kulshrestha
Date: 8/23/2014 8:47:00 AM
Thanks Casarah!
Date: 8/20/2014 9:32:00 AM
Was the dress either Titian or Venetian Red I wonder. You too are an artistic poet but in a realistic way. I have been accused of being an artistic poet in other ways. May the power of the pen and poem continue to march on. Jim Horn
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Sandeep Kulshrestha
Date: 8/23/2014 8:47:00 AM
Thank you James. I have never been to Venice but the power of my dreams took me to that realm!
Date: 8/20/2014 2:17:00 AM
wonderful imagery many congrats on being selected for poem of the day:-) Hugs jan xx
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Sandeep Kulshrestha
Date: 8/20/2014 2:27:00 AM
Thanks Jan!
Date: 8/20/2014 1:59:00 AM
Very amazing write....I enjoyed the imagery and the deeper meanings.,.those ending lines...wow! Congrats on being POTD/
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Sandeep Kulshrestha
Date: 8/20/2014 2:26:00 AM
Oh yes ;)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/20/2014 2:09:00 AM
Red has that effect! ;) Every woman should have a read dress and red high heels! :)
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Sandeep Kulshrestha
Date: 8/20/2014 2:07:00 AM
Thanks Eileen! I am inspired by an actress I met recently in a poetry meet, wearing red!
Date: 8/20/2014 1:22:00 AM
Gorgeous Sandeep... Congrats on being chosen as the poem of the day!
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Sandeep Kulshrestha
Date: 8/20/2014 1:43:00 AM
Thank you so much Verlena. I am so grateful for your kind remarks. Sandeep
Date: 8/19/2014 9:14:00 AM
Beautiful imagery - beautiful write! Thank you for sharing this poetic gem! Pandita
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Sandeep Kulshrestha
Date: 8/20/2014 9:30:00 AM
Thank you for your kind and gentle words!
Date: 8/19/2014 2:48:00 AM
Wow. Heartfelt piece.
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Sandeep Kulshrestha
Date: 8/20/2014 9:31:00 AM
Thank you so much for your generous comments :)

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