A Knock on the Door

    Shaken to the core
      by a knock on the door

    My mood’s not conducive
      to visitors intrusive
      
    Though what else am I here for
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Date: 8/25/2025 5:40:00 PM
Oh bother! Who's that knocking at our door. Me: You get it, Bill. Bill: No, it's your turn. For some reason we don't like unannounced visitors...weren't always that way. Me thinks we're set in our ways :-)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/25/2025 7:28:00 PM
Yep. That's what happens as we turn inward upon ourselves.
Date: 8/25/2025 3:21:00 PM
Hello Gershon, If it is visitors, then enjoy their company. . if it is a door to door sales man, tell him to leave. Enjoy your evening my cfriend. Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/26/2025 3:45:00 PM
Hello Gershon oh! so you did. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/25/2025 7:26:00 PM
Gotcha, Darlene.
Date: 8/25/2025 12:05:00 PM
Point well taken, Gershon. We do have to have a purpose to justify our remaining here. Bill
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/25/2025 7:24:00 PM
I have a porpoise. Will that do?
Date: 8/25/2025 10:54:00 AM
Ha! This is very cool, Gershon!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/25/2025 7:20:00 PM
Just call me 'Mr. Cool.' Always picture me with double-mirror-wraparound-shades...
Date: 8/25/2025 5:06:00 AM
You're here for, to open the door -- your caring, tutoring heart has already been accessible to all of us, for many delightful years now. Blessings my friend. Have great writing week!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/25/2025 7:18:00 PM
Ha, ha. You wrote 'tutoring heart.' I read 'tottering heart.' 'Cos that's what I've got...
Date: 8/25/2025 4:47:00 AM
I know that feeling - people matter, but I was in the middle of something (that probably doesn't matter but I hadn't finished it yet). J :)
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Date: 8/25/2025 2:43:00 AM
I really like the simplicity and honesty in this, Gershon . The tension between solitude and connection comes through so clearly.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/25/2025 7:14:00 PM
Thanks for recognizing that connection, Rowena. :)
Date: 8/24/2025 10:24:00 PM
That could have been me GW.' Lol)))
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/25/2025 7:12:00 PM
Come to think of it, the person was wearing a white hat...
Date: 8/24/2025 9:09:00 PM
This is a cute poem.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/25/2025 7:11:00 PM
And I thank you for the cute comment, Hilda.
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