A Kittenish Autumn Afternoon


              

Two kitty cats, strode up an autumnal. red-leaved covered hill.

The day being cast in loveliness, they went to visit the old mill.

By then it was noon, so they fried delicious fish on a picnic grill.

Then, sauntered home, to snore like royalty, upon a heavenly, comfy, velvetty-covered, window sill!


                        
                         9/18/2025

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Greenhough Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 1:43 PM
Cats are adorable. This was a nice tribute to our feline friends.
Romios Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 5:57 PM
I have had cats for decades,and keep humans centered, with their soothibg purrs.)) T.Y. “Pangie”
Eagle Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 11:49 AM
This is a beautiful poem. I enjoy reading your creative works.
Romios Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 12:51 PM
Dear Elena, when I first wrote this, I thought, how infantile! Then I read it at least three times.. and I saw the beauty in this poem. Beuty is simplicity and truth. Thank you, “ Pangie “
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September 20, 2025 at 10:27 AM
Hi dear Pangie, your little poem left me with a warm comforting feeling, have a lovely weekend God bless you.
Romios Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 10:53 AM
Dear John hope all i well with you. I think of you when GB is on, especiatlly, so I am bo stranger to what you face, best wishes! Am very pleased you liked my humble poem ..fun to write it! .” Pangie”
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September 19, 2025 at 2:31 PM
I enjoyed reading your creative "A Kittenish Autumn Afternoon" write. Enjoy your day/weekend writing away...........
Romios Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 6:34 PM
Dear Paula, it’s a true gift to hear from you today. Thank you.. I know you can tell I haven’t been around.. I’m doing OK my vision is better so that’s exciting. And then I get to start philosophizing about the world and what is ahead for us , so I can’t write at those times.. I also would like to spend more time on the Bible than poetry. I don’t want my ego to get way out of control.. I hope that you’ve been doing well. And I’m sure your poetry is going fantastically.. It’s exciting that so many holidays are coming up. don’t you?. Eddie loves his university and has grown more , and now spoirtinga short beard.,,, “ Pangie”
Hamilton Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 2:22 PM
simply lovely Pan very descripted write hugs Shadow
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September 19, 2025 at 11:21 AM
Hello Panagiota, thi is a cute poem. It made me smile. My fav. Hugs. xxx Darlene/
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September 20, 2025 at 2:50 PM
Hello Panagiota, Your poem was cute. It made me smile. Your welcome for the fav.Hugs. /Darlene/
Romios Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 6:27 PM
Dear Ddarlene, I was uo reading your mail till last night! Thank you…you got my mind gioing. I just re-read my poem! It is to be ejoyes as you did, i can still envision those cats having a ball.)) So grateful, you Faved this! At first, I thought this is really stupid and then I saw how beautiful it really was!! Have a great day with your cat and I’ll have a great day with mine.! “ Pangie”
Sheehan Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 10:05 PM
Wonderful rhyme. Nice rhythm and flow. Great imagery.
Romios Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 5:41 PM
Dear Frank, this is one of my simplest poems and I appreciate your reading it despite that! I do not write to impress nor win. Though I have written over 3,700 poems. Including ones about love, patriotism, my family, politics and the human condtion. Multiple POTDs, too , You are invited to read any or none! I will be reading you… With kindest thoughts… Best wishes! “Pangie”
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