A Kiss So Sweet

My life was gently moving on
Grief abating, resolve growing strong
Until his kiss, within a dream
Ripped away the seams
Holding back the pain deep in my core,
Tears fell once more.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/7/2011 3:16:00 PM
Thanks for the congrats, Janette, I have not seen you on the site lately, I hope you are gently moving on, I know so well, how difficult that is~~
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Date: 11/15/2010 7:44:00 PM
Dreams are tough, aren't they? Haven't figured out how to manipulate 'em yet. This is a poignant write - thanx.
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Date: 10/4/2010 8:26:00 PM
Oh, dreams can be so real, and you described the feeling from it fantastically! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/25/2010 7:44:00 AM
the pain from loss eventually evolves into other emotional feelings. the loss will always be in your heart, it will just hurt less painfully and will eventually fill a void in your life. being the deep loving person that you are will help you heal. thank you for your thoughts, chuck
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Date: 9/25/2010 7:20:00 AM
Janette, you will have those dreams and times when the pain seems to come back stronger than ever. Recovering from your loss will be a jagged pattern -- good days and bad ones. It can't be rushed or forced. When the pain comes, we just have to bear it and know that one day we will feel happiness again. I know it's hard and I hope your recovery continues to progress. Much love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 9/25/2010 7:19:00 AM
Heartfelt and sad poem Janette, have a wonderful weekend Rock Chic >> James :)
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