Crystol Woods Poet Shape

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A Calligram

A Kiss on the lips

                                Oh,my!          Oh,my!
                     Eyes focus    lazily      on my lips
              A hunger for something other than food
          Innocently imagining nothing more than this
         Me                                  &                                 You
          Only the tension of desire for the intimacy of
         Sweet mouths pressed and mingling of breath 
         Beating hearts entwined.. the passage of time
             The expression of tender love and bliss 
                                     Sharing a kiss.

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Benjamin Bartley August 28, 2024 at 12:00 PM Your husband is a lucky man! LOL. Thanks for sharing. And here, I'm blowing you back a X. Crystol Woods August 28, 2024 at 5:18 PM Oh caught it! Muah! Xo

Paul Callus August 9, 2024 at 11:49 AM The shape of this Calligram captures the reader's attention right from the start, Crystol. Of course, the main characters "me & you" deserved taking centre stage. Above all, you present this sensual moment of desire and intimacy with a most capable pen. (a fave) ~ Best regards, my friend // paul Crystol Woods August 28, 2024 at 5:20 PM Oh! Thank you Paul! Xo Crystol Woods August 28, 2024 at 5:20 PM Oh! Thank you Paul! Xo Crystol Woods August 28, 2024 at 5:16 PM Oh! Thank you Paul! Xo

Arlo Parker August 9, 2024 at 9:55 AM Urgent soft passion single lingering kiss…. see you after work. Day launch ;-)) Crystol Woods August 28, 2024 at 5:16 PM Yess always anticipate home coming! Ty for stopping by! Xo

Sam Kauffman August 8, 2024 at 11:23 AM This romantic poem is so tender expressing the sweetness of a kiss of commitment. Blessings to you. Well done. This is not easy. Crystol Woods August 8, 2024 at 3:46 PM Tysm Sam! Xo

Andrea Dietrich August 7, 2024 at 4:32 PM I love this. Isn't it shape poetry? A fave for me Crystol Woods August 7, 2024 at 9:28 PM I believe it's the same thing, a shape poem or a calligram.Tysm! Xo

Daniel Henry Rodgers August 6, 2024 at 8:27 AM Dear Crystol, You made my reading more immersive and evocative with your clever calligram! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Crystol Woods August 7, 2024 at 9:28 PM Thank you Daniel! Xo

Kim Rodrigues August 5, 2024 at 4:56 PM Nice! Enjoyed! Crystol Woods August 6, 2024 at 6:56 AM Thank you Kim! X

John Lawless August 5, 2024 at 12:49 PM ...PUCKER UP......this poem was just the gentle kiss i needed in the moment....thank you....for your vivid and sensual, sensitivity..... Crystol Woods August 6, 2024 at 6:55 AM Muah! Thanks John! X