A Kiss on the lips

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A Calligram

Oh,my! Oh,my! Eyes focus lazily on my lips A hunger for something other than food Innocently imagining nothing more than this Me & You Only the tension of desire for the intimacy of Sweet mouths pressed and mingling of breath Beating hearts entwined.. the passage of time The expression of tender love and bliss Sharing a kiss.

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Benjamin Bartley

Date: 8/28/2024 12:00:00 PM

Your husband is a lucky man! LOL. Thanks for sharing. And here, I'm blowing you back a X.

Crystol Woods
Date: 8/28/2024 5:18:00 PM

Oh caught it! Muah! Xo

Paul Callus

Date: 8/9/2024 11:49:00 AM

The shape of this Calligram captures the reader's attention right from the start, Crystol. Of course, the main characters "me & you" deserved taking centre stage. Above all, you present this sensual moment of desire and intimacy with a most capable pen. (a fave) ~ Best regards, my friend // paul

Crystol Woods
Date: 8/28/2024 5:20:00 PM

Oh! Thank you Paul! Xo

Crystol Woods
Date: 8/28/2024 5:20:00 PM

Oh! Thank you Paul! Xo

Crystol Woods
Date: 8/28/2024 5:16:00 PM

Oh! Thank you Paul! Xo