A Kiss In the Pouring Rain

A kiss in the night, in the pouring rain She knows real passion, makes me quite insane I love the romance that she exhibits Blowing me away into little bits Each part of me still burns with loving awe I kiss her back by, I do grab and maw Exploring every part of her body I enjoy the awesome sensuality As the rain pours our hearts meld into one Our heart beats, blood’s rushing, nothing is gone We blend, our flesh slides, we find utter heights Flying higher than those grand, massive kites I kiss her in the night under the rain Our love will last always, it will remain Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Akter  Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 12:30 PM
Nice
Gasun Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 9:15 AM
Wow! This is a very impressive sonnet my very dear friend Russell. Hand salute for this outstanding poem of yours my dear friend. Super love it. Thank you so much for sharing. I want to read more but my internet is getting so slow. So, i'll come back soon ok. TYTYSM for everything! More blessings and have a wonderful wkend ahead with your family/love ones. Good night. love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
Horne Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 2:51 PM
beautiful passionate write, my friend. Hadn't realised it was so long since my last Soup visit
Onclaud Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 10:25 AM
ohh i'll have to give this a grade of A for awesome sensuality, russell... you sizzle even in the rain... fantastic job!.. huggs
Kendrick Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 5:59 AM
Well, I don't know if kissing in the rain would be romantic or not..Maybe in the summer when the rain felt cooling. ..Interesting work..If for a contest should do well..Thanks for stopping by my work "Reverberates"..It is back down to 26 this morning..I don't know if the blooms and buds and birds made it through the night..It is to be like that again tomorrow night then back up warmer again but still almost freezing range..Thanks for the kind remarks..Sara
Kayode Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 5:30 AM
Nice as usual Russell the explorer,how I wish I could find a field to explore while rain goes on,I wish to love.Brilliant.
Hamilton Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 4:58 AM
a wonderful sonnet Russell full of hot passion expertly written hugs
Ioane Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 3:58 AM
How romantic and beautiful ! yes you must keep that love alive. It's so describtive it should be x-rated - I love it, thanks for sharing. Tiaua.
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