A Kiss in the Dark

It begins
like the first drop of rain on parched earth—
a whisper,
not yet a touch,
but a promise hanging in the air.

The world dissolves;
walls collapse into shadows,
the clock forgets its ticking.
We are suspended—
two constellations spiraling
toward collision,
a secret carved into the night.

Your breath is a feather,
brushing against my skin,
and my heartbeat
is a moth
trapped in the lantern’s glow.

In this darkness,
where sight surrenders,
I feel everything—
the gravity of your nearness,
the quiet tremble of your soul,
the weight of words unspoken.

This kiss is no kiss at all,
but a quiet revolution,
a map to the unknown,
a key to the door
I never dared open.

Outside, the stars watch
with their silent, jealous light.
The moon hides behind clouds,
a voyeur cloaked in silver.

And as our lips meet,
the universe exhales—
not with fire,
but with the soft, unrelenting hum
of two infinities touching.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 12/29/2024 12:22:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this exceptional poem, Dufflite. "I feel everything— the gravity of your nearness, the quiet tremble of your soul, the weight of words unspoken." Wow, I loved these lines! I'm glad I discovered you. Wishing you a Happy New Year!
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Date: 1/18/2025 5:45:00 PM
Just thrilled. Thank you for the kind words.
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