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13.12.2024

Anne-Lise  Andresen 
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This or That, Vol 29 - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

4th place in the contest

 

- A Kiss In The Dark -

    Dusk, 
           depicted two silhouettes
    Silence under the glow of a street lamp
    Blushing and smiling a little nervously
    A seemingly random touch,
                   breathless excitement

    Passionate lips, 
                    soft and slow
    Fireworks display from the rainbow
    The miracle was there for them alone
    This kiss left both
                    quite weightless on pink clouds
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Ibeh Avatar
December 29, 2024 at 4:50 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully composed poem, Anne-Lise. Enjoyed it. Wishing you a Happy New Year!
Beaufort Avatar
December 17, 2024 at 7:52 AM
Anne-Lise, gotta love when an experience like this gets a brilliant description. The joy of romance makes us all smile...so thanks for this one!!
Hind Avatar
December 16, 2024 at 9:04 AM
Lovely writing - very romantic <3
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2024 at 9:12 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment, Paige :) - hugs
Empress Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 9:35 AM
Ah this is so beautiful and made my heart smile! How soul warming! Brilliant verse on the prompt! Absolutely loved reading this! Best wishes for the contest too
Gasun Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 6:40 AM
Such a superb romantic poem you've crafted my dear poet Anne-lise. One of my favorites among the romantic poems I've read. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes as well to you. Hugs God bless you always and your poetry.
Anaya Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 5:11 PM
Very sweet and romantic, "The miracle was there for them alone" favorite line, Anne-Lise. xo
Rose  Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 4:30 PM
Very romantically soft and beautiful gl in the contest Anne
Read Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 10:26 AM
Ahh Anne that brings back lovely memories, good luck in the contest. xx
Buhagiar Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 10:07 PM
What an excellent love poem. You capture emotions so well. Hugs.
Cunningham Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 12:38 PM
Quite a sensual write and romantic too. Best of luck in the contest Anne-Lise. Tom
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