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A Kiss For You

Fly Higher go further cross the oceans cross the mountain's top touch the sun, kiss the stars I'm blowing a kiss to you like shooting stars in my dreams butterfly kisses each day for you to greet good morning, to whisper goodnight.

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Jim Tidd

Date: 11/4/2013 2:58:00 PM

Nice poem. I hope some editorial suggestions do not make you mad. "cross the mountains top" should be either "cross the mountain's top" or "cross the mountain tops" you sometimes use "a" in front of plurals: It should either be: "like a shooting star in my dreams" or "like shooting stars in my dreams"

Charmane Bellen
Date: 11/10/2013 1:12:00 PM

it's so nice of you Jim, thanks a lot. Its no big deal, i appreciate it and will take your advises. Glad you made rounds to my pieces. :) Mane

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 9/17/2012 3:51:00 AM

Ah! Beautiful in verse and construction! Cynthia

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 8/29/2012 10:32:00 AM

ah..lovely poem, delight my time, enjoy this much:) thanks for nice kiss Charm...luv SK

Charmane Bellen
Date: 9/17/2012 3:45:00 AM

welcome my dear..thanks for visiting my poem >>charmane