A Kiss For You

Fly Higher go further cross the oceans cross the mountain's top touch the sun, kiss the stars I'm blowing a kiss to you like shooting stars in my dreams butterfly kisses each day for you to greet good morning, to whisper goodnight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Tidd Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 2:58 PM
Nice poem. I hope some editorial suggestions do not make you mad. "cross the mountains top" should be either "cross the mountain's top" or "cross the mountain tops" you sometimes use "a" in front of plurals: It should either be: "like a shooting star in my dreams" or "like shooting stars in my dreams"
Bellen Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 1:12 PM
it's so nice of you Jim, thanks a lot. Its no big deal, i appreciate it and will take your advises. Glad you made rounds to my pieces. :) Mane
Alvez Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 3:51 AM
Ah! Beautiful in verse and construction! Cynthia
Komala Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 10:32 AM
ah..lovely poem, delight my time, enjoy this much:) thanks for nice kiss Charm...luv SK
Bellen Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 3:45 AM
welcome my dear..thanks for visiting my poem >>charmane
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