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A Kiss

Your kiss is lightening that strikes my lips, And when your embrace is mine, A voltaic vitality surges from my hips, Disembracing me, as I unravel like twine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/8/2017 8:28:00 AM
Oh this is so beautifully romantic and passionate. I love it! A-7 to be sure! Best regards. Pandita
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B.J. Fitz
Date: 2/8/2017 8:30:00 AM
Thanks Pandita, your input means a lot to me!

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