Debbie Duncan Poet Free verse

A Kiss

As you and I swim the same ocean 
I swim the vastness of it in search of you
 
There are no boundaries to what we can do 
If I love you and you love me

The hidden shores are awaiting us  
let us go then to paradise 

You bring me in like a love struck  dove 
sitting on her perch 

You have put a light in my heart that I 
never thought was possible 

Your love unwinds me like a ball of yarn
as we lay together as one soul

The love I have inside is just for you alone 
as I feel the softness of your words 

Your warmth fills my aching soul
I dream of your lips on mine 

I had a dream that we shared a kiss once 
It was a kiss that lasted forever

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Gu Jendayi November 6, 2022 at 7:22 AM Love how you put this together

Andrea Dietrich January 14, 2013 at 2:33 PM beautiful thoughts and it reads like an extended valentine to the one you love. Debbie Duncan January 14, 2013 at 9:36 PM Thank you Andrea ;}

Don Johnson December 20, 2012 at 3:59 AM So loving sweet, kiss brings the heat, a closer link to passion, entitled here, your love sincere, entitles you, your ration, heartfelt, the mind retreats, consumes one in its fashion, till estacy deletes... re: A Kiss Debbie Duncan Don Johnson Debbie Duncan December 21, 2012 at 12:40 AM I thank you Don ;}

Richard Lamoureux November 26, 2012 at 9:30 PM What a wonderful love story, you draw the reader into your bliss. I have very much enjoyed reading your poems. You are an excellent writer.

Cecilia Macfarlane September 20, 2012 at 4:05 PM I hope your dream kiss comes true....sweet and lovely write Debbie. Hugs! Debbie Duncan September 20, 2012 at 6:57 PM Thank you CeCilia for your sweet words hugs back at ya ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen July 24, 2012 at 3:04 PM This is a sweet kiss poem Debbie....love it and hope it will last forever. - oxox love Anne-Lise <3 Debbie Duncan July 24, 2012 at 10:21 PM Hello Annie ,,,, thank you,,, I'd like that kiss to last forever too,,,, but there is only me ;} you have a blessed day ;}

Don Johnson July 15, 2012 at 4:52 PM the one time chance the sweet romance, the thoughts of long ago, when love was spirited in its dance, but i had to let you go, but memory comes en-trance:( i know..... re Dubby Duncan "A Kiss" Don Debbie Duncan July 15, 2012 at 5:42 PM Hello Don ;} A kiss from a prince of a guy " you "

Michael J. Falotico July 15, 2012 at 8:42 AM A very sweet tender write... filled with warmth and love....hugs Michael Debbie Duncan July 15, 2012 at 3:56 PM Thank you Michael for reading my words ;}

Terry O'Leary July 4, 2012 at 1:11 PM Beautiful 'love word'!!! Very nice... Terry Debbie Duncan July 4, 2012 at 8:58 PM Thank you Terry for stopping by to read it ;}

Don Johnson June 26, 2012 at 8:54 PM soul searching for the other half, the other half of coin, ladies romance, so sweetly cast, meets man of the fiery loins, en charmed be calmed, enjoyed... thank you Debby Duncan "A Kiss" Don Don Johnson June 27, 2012 at 12:14 AM nothing sweeter, soulful meter, and the passion of the past, completes her... at last... Debbie Duncan June 26, 2012 at 9:42 PM Thank you Don,,,,, old love letters ;}

Jl Sadberry May 21, 2012 at 11:59 PM *.* ... "THE MOST BEAUTIFUL KISS OF ALL, 'YOU!'" ... *.* Debbie Duncan May 22, 2012 at 4:14 AM Thank you ,,, have a blessed day .

Shirley Long May 7, 2012 at 11:00 AM This is such a sweet romantic love poem, I enjoyed reading it today. Each verse about the kiss sends so much excitement and arousal to one's soul. Good write.

Kash Poet May 7, 2012 at 8:41 AM A beautiful poem of romance and passion Debbie.Enjoyed reading it.

David Williams May 7, 2012 at 6:27 AM Debbie romantic and great imagery..David