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Last Words of Saint Louis IX, King of France, 1270

A King’s Last Word was Horse

A winter’s king with heart of cold,
A crooked form, a tale untold,
He clambered high on broken vows,
To place the crown on anxious brows.
But shadows whispered, “Never rest,”
With guilt a viper in his breast.
The children lost, the white rose slain,
A fleeting crown, a world of pain,
At Bosworth Field, the final breath,
A lonely fall to silent death. 
With shoulder hunched and mind too keen,
He reigned in the brief, darkest scene.
No friends at last to hold the shield,
All alone on a blood-red field.
No noble song, no gentle cry,
Beneath a cold and changing sky.
The crown is gone, the dust remains,
A king of sorrow and of stains.
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Radhakrishna Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 11:00 AM
William great write! I saw the play in RSC and a superb play it was! Well done on sketching the King’s life so well!!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 2:41 PM
What a grand experience, watching it being performed!
Alex Avatar
February 25, 2026 at 6:52 PM
"A crooked form, a tale untold" - A very beautiful ode on King Richard III. Congratulations!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 25, 2026 at 8:20 PM
A wonderful sharing, blessings to you.
Liguori Avatar
February 25, 2026 at 9:32 AM
Wonderful poem; glad I could place it high.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 25, 2026 at 10:26 AM
My extended courtesies and heartfelt thanks for my placement.
Fowler Avatar
February 25, 2026 at 7:20 AM
As always William, your rhyming and rhythmic flow are flawless. Such an enjoyable read. Congratulations! :)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 25, 2026 at 10:23 AM
With my kindest regards, and gratitude.
Godwin Avatar
January 28, 2026 at 5:02 AM
Very 'tight' rhyme and flow which means, to me, excellent writing. I enjoyed.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 28, 2026 at 11:14 AM
Thank you for your kind sentiments.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
January 26, 2026 at 5:17 PM
outstanding rhyme scheme and recounting of an historical battle.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 27, 2026 at 7:54 AM
With my deepest appreciation, my friend, Aloha, William.
Theraven Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 5:29 PM
Hello Hilo Poet, Fine telling of this age old place and time in history. The last English king to die in battle. -Richard
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 7:15 PM
The titled word was his final yield, his words were his sword, and the horse his shield. With my appreciation, William.
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