A Key West Captain's Tale

Offshore in a Key West snorkeling trip
The old tar captain was really quite hip
Asked where the Bermuda Triangle was,
At first he laughed, then looked at me with pause

“About twenty yards yonder,” he replied
You should have seen how my eyes opened wide
“I was on a ship once,” he continued,
“Through a deep green mist our vessel did glide.”

He swore a UFO hovered above
Until the fog lifted and skies were clear
“Oh, my!” I cried, “This is what I write of --
I can’t believe the triangle is so near!”

Though captain and crew had been left unharmed
All of them remembered that eerie day
Just as I’ll not forget feeling alarmed
With the triangle not so far away

The captain had tales, legends in his head 
An incredible inspiration source
That night on land as I lay in a bed
I wished I’d learned more; I felt much remorse


*True Story.  I was writing a book on Atlantis and the Bermuda Triangle when I met the old captain.


*For Craig Cornish Contest on tge Most Fascinating Person I Knew
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kithinji Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 4:26 AM
Go West my daughter... and grow with the country...Lovely poem.
Goff Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 1:27 PM
I really like this, Carolyn, thanks! Jimmy
Undertaker Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 12:03 AM
great! I would be following your poems
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June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
an experience expressed with life.
Maverick Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 7:37 AM
I was sure i had commented on this tale before.. A write with echoes of the unknown resounding through its salt laden lines Carolyn..yours Joe..'
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 5:24 AM
Are you and your friend still writing this book? Wondering how you are doing. With Love, Dane Ann
Konos Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 5:17 PM
Best I have read in a while...where are you now?
Poet Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 3:43 AM
Good Morning Carolyn!very nicely penned Poem about Bermuda Triangle.Hope you have finished the book.Miss you here.
Kendrick Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 5:15 AM
Intertesting work..The Bermuda Triangle and the Fountain of Youth right there close to you and not far from me..Sara
Dillard Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 8:31 PM
Carolyn, I hope you're just busy publishing a book and haven't left us for good. God forbid you've disappeared in the "triangle"! Just wanted to know you're OK.
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 2:35 PM
I am finally seeing this one . YOu did really well in the contest with it and I really found it interesting. Was just thinking of you today and wondering how you are doing. Linda is not coming here any more either. But I think you are here sometimes, right? Hope to hear from you sometime. LUv, Andrea ps. Big congrats on your win.
Burch Avatar
March 1, 2013 at 9:21 PM
Congratulations !!! Carolyn!! Well done. I hope all is tollerable with you. ;) love you bunches deb
Richards Avatar
March 1, 2013 at 7:13 PM
It is such a joy to see a poem of yours again, Carolyn! Hope you are doing well !!! You have been missed!
Roberts Avatar
March 1, 2013 at 7:04 PM
congrats Caroline ....Seren
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March 1, 2013 at 1:20 PM
Yes it would have been extremely interest ion to listen to the captain's stories. Congrats on your well deserved win Carolyn. Connie
Ball Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 7:14 AM
Hey you? Sorry that I haven't been able to answer your comment page but I'm dealing with majorhealth isssues and I'm slowly recovering as usual you continue to amaze, what a gift very good love the intrique of the triangle. God bless Bob
Chircop Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 8:51 AM
Carolyn sweet Carolyn howv i miss you.Hiw are you?So many changes in my lilfe.I feel familiar with this poem.My pleasure to read you again..big hug
Haick Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 3:22 PM
As always, your write the most interesting and well written poems, Seafaress! This is another gem from your long list of exceptional poetry! Love, Annalise
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