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A Kaleidoscopic Sky

Written: December 05, 2023 __________________________________________ Earth's mysteries—swirling in the sky. Heaven is comely with lemon meringue. Vaporizing clouds are dulcet and colored. Cinnamon light was shed on my shoulders. Peering onto the horizon of a waning sun. Beethoven and Mozart split into the ether. Ruby tangos fuchsia in an outburst of ecstasy. Fetching hues of elixir flash and flare. Obsidian clouds yield a rumble of thunder. Cumulus clouds coal-colored clusters. In erratic black seas, akin to rogue boats. Thunderclaps imbue a shiny sheen. A cyan-blue sky casts her limbs outward. Soaring saffron butterflies and kites. A cloud of endorphins shrouds the world. Amid raucous mirth and glamor lullabies. The sky's evocative color palette. sparked by the effervescent moonlight. delightful days laced with zeal and zest amid a kaleidoscope hallucination.
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Buhagiar Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 1:30 PM
The imagery i fantastic.
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 1:16 PM
That's got a lot cool imagery. Is it for a contest? If so, it would do well, I bet.
Poet Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 2:26 PM
Thanks, Andrea, it's not for a contest
One Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 11:59 AM
Another masterpiece of a poem from you pen with amazing imagery through your great selection of words... what a proficient poet you are .. so many great lines here and colours that bring it to life... i love that last stanza.. you pain the sky so well..
Narain Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 9:42 AM
Nice poem with great imagery.
Pandit Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 6:13 AM
A beautiful painting of nocturnal scene, my friend. Symphony of delightful echoes emanates from your words. Splendidly done!
George Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 4:32 AM
Wow... so beautiful ! Colorful images etched in choicest words.... ! I am intoxicated with the beauty of the kaleidospic sky you have described. "Obsidian clouds yield a rumble of thunder. Cumulus clouds coal-colored clusters. In erratic black seas, akin to rogue boats. Thunderclaps imbue a shiny sheen" Here the sky appears in another countenance, not quite charming, yet beautiful. Another FAVE, dear friend.
Empress Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 12:08 AM
This is absolutely gorgeous. I love your mozart and beethoven reference. And also the detailed descriptive wordplay a d how effortlessly and eloquently your words free flow throughout. Your use of various colors too here is so creative ans artistic. I especially love the lines “ Soaring saffron butterflies and kites.“ “ delightful days laced with zeal and zest“ exquisife alliterations and diction, truly a profound poem worth reading and faving! Every line in this is sheer poetic brilliance.
Ball Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 6:41 PM
So beautifully described here Lasaad. I have often watched the sky and found so much color and beautiful pictures ever changing. If you have ever seen the Northern Lights you will know what I'm referring to. Loved this. God Bless, JB
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