Pace Ink-U-Script Poet Free verse

A Kaleidescope Dream

From depths of magnified sleep, we'd exchange pleasantries;

elated temples inspired love romantically;

Creating colors

no other has

experienced

instrumentally.

We cast amid

purple sea,

our feet

distant from

jealousy; Our eyes,

our lips and our hands set out chronicling this

moment as select memory.(Sigh) Delighted to awake, cradling love bout me!

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Beata Agustin February 12, 2023 at 8:37 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. May I share God's love with you, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.

Caren Krutsinger December 5, 2019 at 10:39 PM "Creating colors no other has experienced" - WOW!

Carla Ingram November 27, 2019 at 2:50 AM Beautiful words

Brenda Chiri September 22, 2019 at 11:38 AM This was amazing! Your writing holds so much beauty!;) Pace Ink-U-Script November 2, 2019 at 12:14 PM You’re too kind...thank you B

Justcallme Britt July 14, 2018 at 2:00 PM This is beautiful. Soup Mail Friend <3

M. L. Kiser July 8, 2017 at 10:29 PM Beautiful imagery, beautiful flow.

James Inman February 19, 2017 at 6:36 AM Another lovely write. I enjoy your varied line lengths, and the last line is wonderful.

John Fleming January 5, 2017 at 8:21 PM Not seen you around for awhile, Pace...thought I should drop you a line and inquire as to your well being - well I hope! Wishing you all the very best for your New Year...May it be a contented and rewarding one - Cheers, Pace! :) john

Newton Ranaweera December 25, 2016 at 9:13 PM I love this too. Great writing.

Richard Nnoli November 30, 2016 at 8:15 AM This is beautiful bro! With a magical effect, I love the flow! Well pened richard

Br3e K. R. November 27, 2016 at 9:16 AM I love this and it's named after on of my favorite albums

James Inman November 23, 2016 at 10:09 AM After reading this lovely poem I'm left with a warm feeling inside of me.

Afolabi Muideen September 15, 2016 at 6:15 AM Wow! What a cute and excellent post............A.M.

Macaiah Gross August 21, 2016 at 9:42 PM Wow, this is beautiful. The flow put me in a peaceful magical setting. Great write :)

Mike Hauser August 8, 2016 at 8:27 AM Wonderful write!

Nette Onclaud August 7, 2016 at 1:25 PM how you delight with this serene melody, pace!.. glad to read you again!..huggs

Tera Brown August 5, 2016 at 12:52 PM Pretty sweet. I like it. Good job.

Darren White August 5, 2016 at 9:35 AM This is simply lovely :)

Laura Leiser July 20, 2016 at 3:12 PM I love how you describe the literal parts of your body with emotional feelings. Very unique! Pace Ink-U-Script July 20, 2016 at 11:32 PM Thank you so much!!! Glad to see your presence :)

Macaiah Gross July 16, 2016 at 11:44 PM Beautiful Pace Ink-U-Script July 20, 2016 at 11:32 PM The clock is ticking!!! Lol

Gordon Mcconnell July 11, 2016 at 2:50 PM Lovely penning Pace, nice one!

Wilma Neels July 9, 2016 at 5:55 AM You make me want to sigh (with a smile) after reading this Pace ;) Hope you are doing good! Enjoyed this gem

Mike Hauser July 9, 2016 at 1:03 AM Beautiful piece my friend

Poet Destroyer A July 5, 2016 at 6:49 AM Ink, I've always enjoyed your style and format. Vivid--- I like how you describe the turning of events before your body took you from dream land. Dreaming of soft warm colors, In a pleasurable way. Linda

Skat A July 3, 2016 at 12:13 AM WOW, this is stunning, PACE. A beautiful poem created by you. SKAT

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