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A Kaleidescope Dream

From depths of magnified sleep, we'd exchange pleasantries;

elated temples inspired love romantically;

Creating colors

no other has

experienced

instrumentally.

We cast amid

purple sea,

our feet

distant from

jealousy; Our eyes,

our lips and our hands set out chronicling this

moment as select memory.(Sigh) Delighted to awake, cradling love bout me!

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Beata Agustin

Date: 2/12/2023 8:37:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. May I share God's love with you, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/5/2019 10:39:00 PM

"Creating colors no other has experienced" - WOW!

Carla Ingram

Date: 11/27/2019 2:50:00 AM

Beautiful words

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/22/2019 11:38:00 AM

This was amazing! Your writing holds so much beauty!;)

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 11/2/2019 12:14:00 PM

You’re too kind...thank you B

Justcallme Britt

Date: 7/14/2018 2:00:00 PM

This is beautiful. Soup Mail Friend <3

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/8/2017 10:29:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, beautiful flow.

James Inman

Date: 2/19/2017 6:36:00 AM

Another lovely write. I enjoy your varied line lengths, and the last line is wonderful.

John Fleming

Date: 1/5/2017 8:21:00 PM

Not seen you around for awhile, Pace...thought I should drop you a line and inquire as to your well being - well I hope! Wishing you all the very best for your New Year...May it be a contented and rewarding one - Cheers, Pace! :) john

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 12/25/2016 9:13:00 PM

I love this too. Great writing.

Richard Nnoli

Date: 11/30/2016 8:15:00 AM

This is beautiful bro! With a magical effect, I love the flow! Well pened richard

Britney Kimbrough

Date: 11/27/2016 9:16:00 AM

I love this and it's named after on of my favorite albums

James Inman

Date: 11/23/2016 10:09:00 AM

After reading this lovely poem I'm left with a warm feeling inside of me.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/15/2016 6:15:00 AM

Wow! What a cute and excellent post............A.M.

Macaiah Gross

Date: 8/21/2016 9:42:00 PM

Wow, this is beautiful. The flow put me in a peaceful magical setting. Great write :)

Mike Hauser

Date: 8/8/2016 8:27:00 AM

Wonderful write!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/7/2016 1:25:00 PM

how you delight with this serene melody, pace!.. glad to read you again!..huggs

Tera Brown

Date: 8/5/2016 12:52:00 PM

Pretty sweet. I like it. Good job.

Darren White

Date: 8/5/2016 9:35:00 AM

This is simply lovely :)

Laura Leiser

Date: 7/20/2016 3:12:00 PM

I love how you describe the literal parts of your body with emotional feelings. Very unique!

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 7/20/2016 11:32:00 PM

Thank you so much!!! Glad to see your presence :)

Macaiah Gross

Date: 7/16/2016 11:44:00 PM

Beautiful

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 7/20/2016 11:32:00 PM

The clock is ticking!!! Lol

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/11/2016 2:50:00 PM

Lovely penning Pace, nice one!

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/9/2016 5:55:00 AM

You make me want to sigh (with a smile) after reading this Pace ;) Hope you are doing good! Enjoyed this gem

Mike Hauser

Date: 7/9/2016 1:03:00 AM

Beautiful piece my friend

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/5/2016 6:49:00 AM

Ink, I've always enjoyed your style and format. Vivid--- I like how you describe the turning of events before your body took you from dream land. Dreaming of soft warm colors, In a pleasurable way. Linda