Sushma A. Singh Poet Jueju

A Jungle Scene

A Jungle scene

   Lion leaps at prey
Loud screams soon give way 
Chilling stillness  drowns
Chomping crushing sounds

Contest Form Jueju
Four lines with
Five syllables each(wujue)

Date March 21 2017

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Kim Merryman April 13, 2017 at 4:18 PM Such vivid imagery, Sushma! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim Sushma A. Singh April 13, 2017 at 8:35 PM Thanks Kim!

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2017 at 8:04 PM Congrats, Sushma. SEeing it again, I feel it's one of my favorites for the jungle theme. Sushma A. Singh April 2, 2017 at 8:30 PM Thank you for your kind words!

Constance La France April 2, 2017 at 5:02 PM Sushma congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Jueju Sushma A. Singh April 2, 2017 at 7:58 PM Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich March 24, 2017 at 9:15 PM oh boy, I agree with Jan. It's chilling. and I like it!! SEVEN Sushma A. Singh March 25, 2017 at 8:26 AM Thanks,Andrea!

Jan Allison March 22, 2017 at 3:38 PM Great description Sushma, i found the imagery quite chilling!:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Sushma A. Singh March 25, 2017 at 8:27 AM Thank you, Jan