A July Dawn

Shaft of sunlight crawls across the lawn,
it's amber wash sets apple trees aglow,
their shadows form, the spearheads of the dawn
now bully cowering bedding plants below.
Before the darkness on the ground recedes,
Blackbird darts out for food, with sudden stops
to monitor some movement in the weeds,
then heads for safety in the bramble tops.
A yawning cat emerges, looks about,
no sport, no competition to amuse,
its shift is over, time to now clock out
for breakfast, comfy cushion and a snooze.
Some folk like lying in, but then they miss
those peaceful, lazy sunrises like this.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Delaney Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 5:05 AM
Hi Viv: My favorite time of day and your sonnet and great photo captures it masterfully.. a sure winner. SuZ
Dutta Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 10:34 PM
So nicely penned. I was comparing my lawn with yours. It lies west side enjoying sun shine after 10 pm.
Sands Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 9:50 AM
Beautifully written Viv :)
Wigley Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 11:15 AM
Thanks, Heidi, a snapshot of my Sunday morning today. Viv x
Cunningham Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 4:13 AM
Great imagery Viv, I used to work for the PO and was one of the up at the crack of dawn brigade, and you do see some wonderful sights of nature. Tom
Wigley Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 11:15 AM
Thanks Tom, you can't beat early mornings , at least for four months of the year. After that, it's all just bloody moths... Regards, Viv
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