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A Joyful Start

melodic bird song

now breaks the morning silence.

it lifts my spirits

and brings a smile to my face.

a joyful start to the day.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

December 21, 2011 at 12:13 PM

Lovely Francine,lovely!!!! OXOX Love Anne-Lise

Don Johnson

December 21, 2011 at 1:18 AM

great tanka yes it is, of birds who talk, the joy it tis, melody enticing....

Robert Pettit

December 20, 2011 at 6:15 PM

You must have a lot of melodic bird songs greeting you every morning. You have described them well with this tanka offering.

Laura Breidenthal

December 19, 2011 at 5:28 PM

How very beautiful this poem is! I am very glad to have stumbled upon it! Do keep up the excellent work! Always, Laura

Andrea Dietrich

December 19, 2011 at 4:02 PM

It's so nice to hear birds singing. Today I just heard a lot of weird angry sounds. Maybe it was a bunch of crows. But I didn't see any of them, just heard them, very loud outside!